rate_review Reviews

Very sweet and your knack for those twist endings, what can I say, you surprised me yet again.

Aw, such bitter sweetness. That was wonderful, I really enjoy your work.
Have you been to Singapore before? The descriptions you gave seemed pretty intimate and really set the scene. I think I'm ready to vacation there myself.

Wow, didn't expect that candy! Powerful. Thanks for sharing, PW

I love the twist! At first I was all "Awww, that's sweet that he went back with chocolates!" and then when I read the last bit, I have to admit I went from "Ewww" to "Well, thats unique...And a wonderful way to celebrate life"

I love when stories can do that, make us run a gamut of emotions...

Wow, I didn't see that tweest coming at the very end, but it was lovingly done. The beginning gave a sweet insight into their vacation and how special it was to them both. It made Ginette's death seem even more tragic, but bittersweet in that she and Devin had some great final memories together.

The only typo that stood out was a missed word in, "They’d also a chocolate bar..."

Let's just hope that the chocolatier won't use the same bowls and molds, etc., again. ;)