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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Jaiden is so fu****!! I love it.
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November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I've been meaning to read this latest update for days now. Or whatever date is was that you updated.
Anyway....great chapter, now we know Jock Bitch is sorta after Jaiden, and now the creeper guy, was it Kyle or Seth? It was never specified.
Thanks for answering my questions, and as always, I look forward to the next update! :)
Anyway....great chapter, now we know Jock Bitch is sorta after Jaiden, and now the creeper guy, was it Kyle or Seth? It was never specified.
Thanks for answering my questions, and as always, I look forward to the next update! :)
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yummy, I love it when jock boys bottom:)
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
awesome! please continue!
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November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like both characters and I can't wait for more!
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November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oooo! I like this story! Especially all the dirty french ;). Dylan is so sexy. I wonder if Jai will be able to dominate him...oh come on, a little hint??????? Your characters are written with realism and I can easily believe these people actually exist. Wonderful work done on the beta-ing :D!! One continuity issue though: before gym Jai had english (chapt. 2) and then right after gym he had english again. I rate this story 5 indulgent, homemade cookies out of 5!!! Yumm...
Waiting patiently for your updates, Quill
Waiting patiently for your updates, Quill
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November 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
LOL, rape in a good way? XD That's fun. I LOOOOOVE this story and can re-read it over and over and over again until the next chapter. X3 *hinthint*
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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story keeps getting better and better! :)
Hmm, seems like Jock Boy is interested in Jai, altho I'm sure he'd want Jai to be his "Jai Bitch" and not the other way around. lol
I had one question tho: I was confused about Nick. He was Jai's best friend, but then moved two hrs. away. So does this mean that Jai (since he moved) is now two hours from his previous home? How ocme he didn't mention in the first chapter, that he was excited to see his best friend again? Just curious.....
Anyway, can't wait to see what happens during detention! lol
Hmm, seems like Jock Boy is interested in Jai, altho I'm sure he'd want Jai to be his "Jai Bitch" and not the other way around. lol
I had one question tho: I was confused about Nick. He was Jai's best friend, but then moved two hrs. away. So does this mean that Jai (since he moved) is now two hours from his previous home? How ocme he didn't mention in the first chapter, that he was excited to see his best friend again? Just curious.....
Anyway, can't wait to see what happens during detention! lol
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November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter. I really like your characters, Dylan too. xD
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November 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great second chapter. Your a witty writer. Slightly confused why Dylan kept callin him a faggof, but turns out to be one too...
Anyway, I'm already pinin for the nxt chapter :D
Anyway, I'm already pinin for the nxt chapter :D