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February 24, 2014 at 12:00 AM
Oh man, these two are going to make all kinds of trouble, just on their own! Looking forward to more!
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January 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can't believe I've just discovered this story just now. It's awesome with awesome characters ! I love Jayden and Dylan. Their interactions are so funny and entertaining !! Their characters are fun also ; i love Jayden, the way he thinks and theh way he acs so coy. He's interesting. And that last chapter... let me tell you, you had me hot and bothered all the way with all the smex and mostly because of Dylan and the way he acted so alpha male and all. I want him to be the seme/top . He's so ... *sighs with drool coming out* hot, dreamy and ... Anyway you get me.
Before I go your google translation are not bad. 4 of them mostly are kinda wrong. If you need any help with your french translation i'll be more than happy to help you. I am French; just pm me with the words you need translated . I can also help correct the wrong words (chap 1 and 4)if you want. Let me know what you think.
Anyway, you absolutely have to update this story. You need to because i so want to know what's going to happen next.
Before I go your google translation are not bad. 4 of them mostly are kinda wrong. If you need any help with your french translation i'll be more than happy to help you. I am French; just pm me with the words you need translated . I can also help correct the wrong words (chap 1 and 4)if you want. Let me know what you think.
Anyway, you absolutely have to update this story. You need to because i so want to know what's going to happen next.
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January 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awww, you translated them at the bottom; I was gonna be all snooty and impressive and prove I knew what they meant already. XD Ah, well. Yeah, umm, jock boy is...very jock boy-ish, lol. Totally typical run of the mill VERY unoriginal insults he's got going there to start off - no wonder Jaiden's unimpressed. I also never really understood the self-introductions in highschool (and on, man, they made us do that shit in college, too...D:). But yeah.
I'd agree, though, that spouting French to one's enemies is a good way to make SURE they continue to not like you....also a good way to make sure they continue calling you a fag. Just an observation. Not a bad start, especially for a first story. :)
~Moonstar
I'd agree, though, that spouting French to one's enemies is a good way to make SURE they continue to not like you....also a good way to make sure they continue calling you a fag. Just an observation. Not a bad start, especially for a first story. :)
~Moonstar
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December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the characters and the chemistry between these two! Please continue!
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December 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ha! They're so into each other and are trying to deny it, it's funny!
Jaiden is a hoot! He comes up with these one liners that are hysterical!
Great chapter; looking forward to more! :)
Jaiden is a hoot! He comes up with these one liners that are hysterical!
Great chapter; looking forward to more! :)
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
XD ahahaha yep. :D
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey there, really enjoyed reading these chapters, seems like a fun story :) and I have a soft spot for bitchy boys *chuckles* Can't wait to see how their relationship will develope from that!
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was hot, the two will be great together if they don't kill each other first! Gee a tie for topper or will they just share the position... can't wait to see who Wins the race. Great story can't wait to read more. G
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey I love your story!!! I'm totally hooked! :D
But I gotta say your french translations are really bad :S
But I gotta say your french translations are really bad :S
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December 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
HOT!Y'know ppl like you should just stop writting about boys doing this after they fight.Nowdays I can't even watch straight guys trying to kill each other without laughing my perverted ass off;)