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by Laevi

schedule October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww, they're falling for each other! Of course they should be glad, or lucky, haha, b/c there's no one else around. Luckily (ha, there's that word again!) they like each other. :)
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Marvelous indeed, LOL! I'm very happy that you have a new posting, I missed you terribly :D
person kylee123
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
The story of Lucky the naked pilot. I love it so far. It seems Ward Avery really does need a vacation and to learn how to relax. I am so happy to see a new story by my favorite writer. Just what I need for a rainy Sunday.
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story is crazy!!!!
Really.
From the fact they crashed for no reason( Lucky probably did it on purpouse just so he can as a true surf boy chill out and fuck a guy( well male whores usually get tired of women after a while and like to experiment.They call themselves bisexuals so they can dip into both jars and in th end they either realize they are latent homosexuals( most of them) or they continue till std/hiv finishes them off.))
THen Wards obsession with then name Janine( mentions her, writes her name).
Then the fact that Lucky ain't scared of toasting his dick and balls on those 670 degrees on the island( well, if he does at leas Ward's will get a dessert).
And the entire sex cene is very manly written.
Going at it with no reszriction&emotions only to get off a.s.ap.
I'm concerned for their mental health if their relationship procedes like this in th efuture, but since this is a wet dream/instant hard-fast jerk-off fantasy....It's crazy good.
And keep the chapters coming*blows her nose while holding her sunglasses becasue it's cold but the story is hot*
;)
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Omg, I love this new story! It sounds like Lost but with only two people! hahah Ok, lame, sorry. But the story is great. You are such a good writer; you're stories are so well-written and descriptive.

I just found this story today; I don't know where I've been and why I haven't read it sooner. Anyway, I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens with these two!

I also love Roy and Drake; any updates planned? hint, hint. :)
person kylee123
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Very interesting. Lucky is in denial. He must have been feeling somewhat tempted to start jerking off with Ward right there in the bed. Ward will have to take this opportunities to teach Lucky about the joys of gay sex :P