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by kippenka

schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh gosh... :'(

The title was absolutely perfect. I'm so glad you chose that one. Also, Miranda is totally Megan Fox. Like, you can't even argue with me about this. That is Megan fucking Fox, okay. And I'm the other girl and now I want to cry because I love Megan and she didn't have to go get food and her hoarse, quiet voice and the beeping and nurses... :'''(

I really liked it. It was really short, but it was wonderful. I wish you had enough muse left to write more but I won't bother you with that. I'm so glad you made this, though, and, despite its anguish, it really made my night.

Thank you. ^^