rate_review Reviews

ok, few questions. i like where you are going with this, but did you mean tokya or tokyo? and you said that he was 'nervous as a transfer student would be, but then you say he is the teacher, it is kind of contradictory, especially since you said that he was only going to be there for three years, which made him seem like even more of a student. once you called mikki, mikko, among a few other typo's, if you would like me to try to point them out, i could probably highlight some of them in a word document for you so that you could look for yourself and make the final decision on whether or not they were suposed to be there. other than the typo's, i really liked this. it has a lot of potential!!! well, email me if you want me to do that. this wwas not meant to be a flame, i truly did enjoy this. it just had a few possible typo's, that's all... ooh, random thought, ever heard the song stamp on the ground? it is addictingly good. i had it on repea for about three or four days after i got it on my ipod~

sorry, thought it would actually show my email... silly thought. do you know why this sight never shows emails? every profile i have visited has an 'emaill hidden' where the email should be. it's strange. why givde a place to type your email if it dosent plan on showing it in the first place? well, anyway, my email is dgraymansorrowinvoked@gmail.com. have a good... night~ it is no longer day, is it...