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for Twisted Fate

by akitochan

person LisaT25
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well, it seems that Ryo is getting to Mikki, whether he likes it or not! :) Can't wait to find out how he plans on seducing his sensei! hahah
schedule December 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Mikki's got trouble on his hands with Ryo now on the hunt, with his sensei on his menu. MUAHAHAHA

Looking forward the next chapter hon! i very much enjoyed this one!!
schedule November 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, now what could happen after this little juicy bit of yummy goodness :D

Mikki falling asleep when he should have been waiting up for his little student to come home to give him private lessons. Tsk, tsk. sleeping on the job can come with consequences.

Great job hon!
person savagehunger47
schedule November 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh poor, poor Mikki. You would think that his uncomfortable vibes would tell him right off that his was getting checked out by the boy, but nooo lol

I loved how Ryo found the perfect way to get Mikki to come to him so he wouldnt break his promise to Toma.

Good job hon.
schedule October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha!!! What's Ryo going to do now since Mikka is in his BEDROOM???? And wtf is he doing in his student's BEDROOM???

I can't wait to find out what's going on with Mikka and how Ryo is going to keep his hands to himself! lol
person savagehunger47
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohhh thank you Hon for dedicating this chapter to me :)

Once again i cant wait to see the next chapter and how Ryo plans to stay away from his teacher when we can clearly see that he doesn't want to.

Keep up the good work sweetheart!
schedule October 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
it has promise. wouldn't mind if you decide to continue it (what I mean is, continue it, if you don't want to suffer inmensurable pains ;P )

seriously, its you who decides, but if it depended on me, i would love to see to the ending of the story.
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I loved how this story is going :) There's so much that could happen and with Ryo's "confession" being said so clearly, in front of everyone like that...well lets just say i cant wait until the next chapter comes out so i can see how much trouble Ryo is making for Mikki.

Much love to ya hon {'3'} *Chu*
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I liked the chapter. can't wait to see what he does to same himself. :)
schedule October 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, great start to this interesting story! I thought for sure Mikko was a new student, not the teacher! lol

The writing is very good; there are few little mistakes here and there, which is totally understandable since English isn't your native language.

If you want someone to go over the chapters before you post them, I'd be more than happy to do so. Just let me know. LisaT25@msn.com

I'm look forward to the next chapter.