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for Twisted Fate

by akitochan

schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Omg, Haruko is so adorable! I loved the scene where she and Ryo were glaring at one another, each jealous of the other, trying to vie for Mikki's attention.

Although the scene where Mikki realized it was Ryo giving him that massage, and he just ran, that was a bit immature of him.

So what's going on w/Daniel? Why is he so sad? If he already has a b/f, why is he trying to get w/Mikki?

Great chapter; looking forward to reading the next one! :)
schedule January 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, even though Mikki got turned on my his imaginary Ryo it was Daniel that got it good in the end *wink, wink* very smexy solo scene hon :) Now onto the next chapter!!
person vasu
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
i really loved it-8,the way you are taking it ahead is fantastic!! and really really interesting toochu.
Looking forward for more and more to come from you.
schedule January 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well, you are certainly the first person to let me know about the calendars! lol

I don't think Daniel should get his hopes up; little does he know that Mikki is talking about his student! lol

It was very interesting reading about all Mikki found online! At least he's doing research, hahah. :)
schedule January 3, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Mikki really has someone watching him from up above the say he gets saved from being eaten by Ryo. But soon he'll use up all of his nine lives and will get caught.

Great chapter hon :)
person vasu
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really loved it,the story i quite interesting and waiting for more.....to read.
schedule December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww, poor Ryo; he almost had Mikki! lol Better luck next time, right! haha

Good chapter, I'm looking forward to the next one! :)
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ohho!!! Mikki certainly has his hands full with Ryo! Or should I say, he WILL have his hands full of Ryo soon! That sneaky devil; booking a hotel room to seduce his teacher. Naughty, naughty Ryo! :)

Great chapter; can't wait to read more! :)
schedule December 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahh Mikki really doesnt learn does he? First falling asleep in his students bedroom and ending up on his bed and now, instead of turning his back and pretending he didnt know the arrogant boy on the street, he gets into the car and foolishly drops his guard and look where he ends up. Well at least its at a classy hotel and not a cheap one ;p

Great installment hon!
person Hollow25
schedule December 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
woa that was hot and that scene wink wink was so real i was almost hook that it was in reality lol silly me
ohhh man mikki what have u gotten yourself into and i love the mental image of a just got of the shower ryo so to quote mikki HOT