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I like this story, poor Ari, I hope Zane comes and kicks some ass. Yes he sucks too but he's the lesser of two evils...

I really like how Ari and Zane aren't in love at first sight (like most arranged-marriage fics I have read). Its better to see them make progress then instantly fall in love because then we can learn more about the characters in the process.
One thing I wanted to see was Ari runaway or get kidnapped. I don't know why but I think it would be interesting to see how Ari and Zane would react during such a situation.

I can't wait for the next chapter~!

Poor kid, I hope life gets better for him! But not too much better because it does make the story interesting... :) Looking forward to the next update

Hello^^

I've just read your slashy Cinderrela (Maybe you don't see it like that but it does remind me of the famous tale) fiction and I really like it^^
I hope the next chapter will be up soon!

Kiss

Nitya

I love the story... I can't wait for more

I must admit the summary sounds delicious.
First chapter...I think you need a proogue for this one.
It was way to fast of me for them to have sex, also we got zilch info about Zane,only about Ari a few things.
But the chapter was long, and the feeling of being dejected is real.
Like with Zane( he feels nothing, but Ari is just a wet dream come true.Like Ari, he feels only fear and is unwilling but feels obliged to come to Zane.)
The part where Harold..incest wasn't really needed imo.
The D.. brother wont be making a comeback that includes a second pairing in the story?
I hope it does,in case I don't like this pairing much.
But I do find your description of zane and Ari very beautiful.
I just regret that Ari is so helpless and Zane so powerfull-sterotip.

and I love the title.
Touche!

This is so entrancing the disfunction of Ari's family is really captivating (in a horrid kind of way).