rate_review Reviews

Great as always! I can't get enough of this fic!

I just can't understand how Ari can even stand, let alone come to dinner and moving around!!! O.o If I were him, after this kind of abuse, I couldn't move for at least a week! :P

anyway, thanks and please update soon! I can't wait to see what is Zane's reaction when he sees Ari's looks ... :D

I can't wait for Harold to get what's coming, Gah I hope someone comes for Ari soon D: I love this story, please keep it up !!

Poor Ari, he has been through so much...I hope he didn't hurt himself from jumping out the window...I did like the symbolism with the bird that Lydia let go and Ari....I hope Zane makes it in time....Harold is seriously obsessed...keep up the good work!

It's been so long since the last update and it's gonna get slower? Oh, well. This story is definitely worth the wait.

Is Aaron going to be a repeating character? Why is he so mad at Zane?

Wow, came across this gem last night and hooked! There seems to be so many political complications that even when Zane finally shows up, there might be little he could do, or want to do. With how screwed up the Parselle family is, and how damaged Ari now is from their abuse, the Duke would probably wouldn't see much benefit in a marriage alliance with the Earl. Zane might even realize that while sex was good, this is too much for him to handle. What will the Earl say when the 'whore' son whom he's trying to marry off has been so abused that it's impossible to hide it? That leaves poor Ari beat down whose only lifeline is a man whom he's only met a few times and haven't truly reconciled their feelings for each other.

Please continue! I sooo want to see Harold eventually get what he so rightly deserves...

what a cliffhanger...I hope Aminri will be alright...I wonder what the darkness is...is he in a coma like state, is he blind...or just unconscious...I hope Zane gets there in time to stop the abuse...I hope Harold gets what is coming to him!

i agree with above reviewer...harold needs to get what's coming to him....lol make sure you explain his pain in gruesome detail (which you're quite good at!) haha

Hi there!

I just found this story and I must say that it makes for a fascinating read, tho I totally cringe at the barbaric torture that creeper Harold inflicts on poor Aminri.

Your writing style is also beautiful~Thanks for sharing! :))

please please please Update this story soon!!!!!!!!

Great Fic! where is the rest??????? I can't wait to read it ...

Please update soon (puppy eyes pleading ...)