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Hi MsC.

Can I get a glimpse of Harold's life in the asylum? Also, is there any way you could create a character that "loves" him in the asylum and show him the "loves" he showed Amirir? He hasn't suffered enough. I want tortured him twice as much as Amirir had. I hate that rat.

Are we going to see Clovis and Zane together intimately in the future? Will Amirir find out? Does he have a chance to grow in this story, to be his own person? And are we going to see the king and the duke's relationship? It seems sad and tragic already but as you can see, I can't wait to read more and find out.

Looking forward to your releases,
renee

P.S. Thank you for editing! Makes the read much easier.

What exactly is the difference between Harold and Zane? They both pushed Ari into doing something he didn't want for their own gratification; Harold beat him into submission, Zane manipulated his body with drugs. Obviously they are both horrible people.

Yaaaaaaaay!! Thanks for the fast update!

I love all the dialogue especially the one with Clovis and Zane. Clovis is interesting and I am curious about his reaction to Ari. It seems that there is something he is not telling Zane.....

*gasps* Why is Ari missing Harold? Surely he is glad that swine got what he deserves, judging from the giggling fit he had in the bed earlier!. Lol! I wonder whether Ari will tell about Harold to Detra when the brothers reunite.

This story rocks!! Can't wait to read what's next! :))

I did like the revisions but I think you need to go back and look at eh chapter first day. I was going back throught he story and that chapter is chapter 8 without any spacing. Somehow Ari and Zane's arrival and meeting of the family has been replaced with the new chapter.

I like this. I didn't think I would but I was bored and decided to read it and I really liked what I read. The story is intriguing and of course the smexing was good. Please do continue this.

This chapter is full of surprises!

I'm a bit confused here cos I thought that Zane only likes doing it with boys lol! Now Ari is the 'step-dad' to his kids?. Quite interesting to see how it will turn out.

I'm so glad that Ari is not forced to wear a dress for the wedding *laughs* and Zane must really learn to respect poor Ari more (at least in bed!). I am so looking forward to reading about the wedding!

Thanks for the update. Please come back with more! :DD

This seems really good so far, but I'm unsure about the sex between Ari and Zane. The crying mid-coitus makes it seem very forced and unhealthy. But maybe that's the intention? Anyways, good job overall! I'm looking forward to the next chapter!

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Thanks for the update.

Finally Ari gets to meet Zane's family! I am so happy that Zane is not disgusted by Ari's (temporary) disfigured face (the nasty bruises and the black eye~Ow!). I like Ari's character alot-adorable (yes!!) and so touchingly vulnerable. Zane's really domineering but I hope Ari will one day stand his ground and not have to obey him so much.

As always, can't wait to read more! Oh,I finally found the review/response thread *grins*

Have a wonderful holiday!

Oh, happy day! You've updated :))

This chapter is all kinds of awesome!.

I love how Zane handles the whole situation with the Earl and that swine aka Harold, especially how so protective he is of Ari. I think there is still a glimmer of hope for happiness for the poor boy. I really do want the Benningtons to treat Ari kindly once he is married to Zane. Zane~ he's like the knight in shining armour (at least for Ari!).

Thanks for sharing~can't wait to read more!

(erm....I can't access the review/reply thread.....dunno why lol!)

I hope Zane does some serious ass-kicking when he comes around. Poor Aminri! That Harold swine is pure evil!

Can't wait to read more!:))