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for Pisachas

by ArtistEisac

person ginstar3
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
brutal cliffhanger. she should have stuck to her first instinct. update soon. can't wait to see how Sachs rescues her from this and kicks Balans ass...☜(゚ヮ゚☜)

On the edge of my seat and sending a Muse from upstate NY -Gin ʘ‿ʘ
person ginstar3
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
nice, but oh how I wish your chapters were longer. Don't listen to me, I'm chapter starved...lolz. Plus I got wrapped up in your story hardcore. Must. Know. What. Happens. Next.

I love the detail you put into this story.The names, the environment, the overall feel...very nice. Your writing is very fluid as well. Sending another muse your way to titillate your mind. *wink*.
person Nuki
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I just stumbled over this story and I already love it! =)
person Mint
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Tis verry interstin..
person Onihime1
schedule November 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm enjoying this. I just found it today and hope you'll keep working on it. In many ways it reminds me of a sort of "Beauty and the Beast" story.
person Mint
schedule November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Upodate
person Amanda88
schedule November 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hope she falls for him and I can't wait to find out what he really is! Great chapter, Please update again soon!
person Amanda88
schedule November 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Please please update again soon! Can't wait to see where the story goes :-)
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So wow I'm intrigued I can't leave an in-depth review right now because I have to go. I shall return though with a better comment as soon as I get a chance.
person Mintgirl
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Your writing is good! I'm impressed haha. Please for the lovce of GOD, update as soon as ya can 8D