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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
It's more than a little horrific that you felt the need to make victim-blaming, rape-apologism culture *reality* in this fic with such loving repeated anvilicious detail.
And it's gross and misogynistic as fuck for you to actually present as a legitimate story that rape happens if somebody has ~gone without sex too long~ and ~just can't help himself.~ Try again, try to be a little less hateful next time.
And it's gross and misogynistic as fuck for you to actually present as a legitimate story that rape happens if somebody has ~gone without sex too long~ and ~just can't help himself.~ Try again, try to be a little less hateful next time.
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January 28, 2012 at 12:00 AM
This isn't DarkFic, it's a fic where someone does grotesque things to innocents and then you and your characters turn around and tell us that really he's a victim! Feel sorry for him! He's a teddy bear! Really, we'll give you ten scenes of him being emo, doesn't that give you the warm and fuzzy feelings?
Honey, if you write a man kicking puppies and dipping them in boiling oil and then immediately turn around two chapters later and say he's really a fluffy soul who likes puppies as much as the next person and have the puppies treat him like any new owner who's strange and maybe in odd circumstances but otherwise not a horrific abuser, the illogical incoherence of our writing is obvious and your readers will boggle. Simply because the 'raping women is no big thing!' is a well-populated and thickly perpetrated myth doesn't make it any more true, or this story any less poorly and offensively plotted.
Honey, if you write a man kicking puppies and dipping them in boiling oil and then immediately turn around two chapters later and say he's really a fluffy soul who likes puppies as much as the next person and have the puppies treat him like any new owner who's strange and maybe in odd circumstances but otherwise not a horrific abuser, the illogical incoherence of our writing is obvious and your readers will boggle. Simply because the 'raping women is no big thing!' is a well-populated and thickly perpetrated myth doesn't make it any more true, or this story any less poorly and offensively plotted.
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April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AMG. Okay, so I would have reviewed every single chapter... but I got too engrossed in this story that I got carried away and just read it all in one go. This is amazing. This is definitely bookmarked and can't wait for an update :D
The suspense is killing me... You are an amazing writer :3
The suspense is killing me... You are an amazing writer :3
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Can't wait until Sach returns! Update soon!
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February 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ugh I can't wait for the next one!!!! That cliffhanger is killing me lol.
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
woohoo u updated!!! lol i never thought bein covered in blood could be so kinky. great job
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February 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
NOOOOO! I hope Satan doesn't rape, or have consensual sex with her, that would make Sach furious! I hope Gilia ends up with Sach!
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
God dammit I hate cliffhangers.I'm so hooked I'm shaking. please update soon. Eew for the meat tree and where the hell is Sachs?
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed the last two chapters and I'm glad you're going to continue. :)
I'm especially anxious to read "the little discussion". ^^
I'm especially anxious to read "the little discussion". ^^
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January 20, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Loving this story...
I started reading it the other night, had dreams about it! You've infected my dreams damn you!
Cant wait for more :D *droool*
I started reading it the other night, had dreams about it! You've infected my dreams damn you!
Cant wait for more :D *droool*