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Superhero World is also miraculously free of STDs, I see, so FellatiLad can have all the anonymous unprotected sex he pleases! How nice for him.

As a few other commenters have mentioned, the hierarchy was never explained. I figured it might have something to do with the -white- rubber band of his locker key; as in, perhaps newbies are given white rubber bands, and the owner (whom I'd decided was the older gent from the locker room) got first crack at them, if they'd let him. Afterwards, the word would spread quicker than TwinkLord's arse-cheeks and after that it'd be first-come-first-serviced. Or maybe it had something to do with the video camera? Like, if there was some signal, and there were more cameras scattered about than dear Captain Bugger-Bum was aware, or something? I don't know. I feel like there ought to be some clue.

In any case, my favourite was definitely the long-haired bloke, even if he DOES have tattoos resembling those of rap performer from the early 2000's, Eve. I would have liked if he and SuperSub had gotten together, or perhaps exchanged numbers or something. BUT, that's me. I think you did a good job with his character, allowing him moments of uncertainty, and whatnot. And he has a washing fetish? No wonder he hangs around in a gay bath house.

Can darling little Cumslut the Candyass Kid be satisfied with less... kinkified forms of intercourse, after all of that? Talk about hitting the ground running, if that was his first time, by this time next year he'll be clipping jump cables to his nips and eating pistachio ice cream out of a wax Robert Mapplethorpe's bunghole just to get an erection. I mean, DAG, yo. For real.

My dear, I keep seeing this story at the top of the updates and I never see a new chapter! This was so tantalizing and dirty that I simply just ate it up and I wish you had a new story for me to read!

Your "Sauna" makes me want to have one of my own. I think I'll write a fic of my own. This one's too good, not to inspire me.

I keep hoping I'll find you've posted another story - this one is UNBEARABLY delicious reading.

I came here looking for a good story to read and this is the first one I checked - and it was just what I was looking for.

At first I thought it was unique since I've never stumbled upon or heard of gay sauna's before.
(And after reading this, I'd want to go sneak into one!)
Though, aside from that, it was well written.
Some typos but I hardly noticed them because I was too focused on the man sex. 8D
The scenes were very nicely written, too. (As if that wasn't obvious enough!)

It made me squirm. Which is def. a good thing. (OwO)b

The ending was a bit rushed but not disappointing. :3
I like the first two guys the hero was with and wasn't disappointed he ended up with the first man.
And that one-shot of the long-haired guy is already on my waiting list. :D

Keep it up!
I'm looking forward to your future writings. ^_^

(And sorry for the long review. ^_^;)

I hope I'm able to leave more than one comment for this story.

Back in chapter 2 I think you forgot to have him wash his ass.

I'm currently wondering who has to fuck him first before the other members can. It just seems unfair to me that he hasn't gotten off yet. I just finished the massage chapter.

Chapter one and two seem to have had the most typo mistakes so far.

I like the story, but I wonder about when it's suppose to be?

So it was the older guy from before. I almost saw that coming, but not the way it did.

Will he now work his way down the list of guys he meet in the order he met them? :)

Best chapter so far. Just because I like the main guys to get something. :)

Interesting. It sounds like those two are getting attached to each other. :)

I got to the end and as I realized that it was a bit green of me to think that he would hook up with the long haired guy, I still liked most of it.

The typos showed up alot again. If you are rushing to post the chapters you really shouldn't. We would like a better written chapter more than a quickly written, but typo filled chapter.

oh, jhoyelba at.hotmail.com is my address if you want to say something to me. I hate how you can't answer comments in this place. :(

Either way, over all it's a good story. It worked in getting me a bit worked up, but I liked when he was with less people then being gang banged. So the start of the story was better for me than the last two chapters, but that is just me.

Hey Crush, You've done an exceptional job with this little fic. You're definitely hit upon the right formula with this one. Plenty of badonkadonks, but with enough story and narrative to keep things moving swiftly forward. As for your protagonist, he is most definitely some sort of superhero/wizard to be able to do everything you've described in his first sexual escapade. He's definitely hero worthy, as heroes are people you aspire to be like...right?

Good luck with writing, and I look forward to seeing further glimpses of your psyche in both the smutty variety, and story based ones, if you try your hand at those.

Peaceout.