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Hi!! I know this is random and I'm not even sure if you're still active on this site...but I was wondering if you were ever planning on finishing this story? I think it is such an original idea! I would love to know how it all works out. Here's hoping for the best! :D

Hi...I just wanted to tell you that I sincerely hope you will one day continue this story. The plot line is so amazing and unique, I really want to know how it all plays out.

I hope this will be updated again and soon because I'm loving this story so far! So good!! >D

I want to read more i think i'll read the other story too.....will that be kinda the same or is it waaaaay different. I really am enjoying the amazing story.....five plus signs for you Q(^.^Q)

That was absoloutly grea! No we get to know a lot more about the world all this is plaing in!!!! I really like it hta tis time around it wasn't only king and jester visiting him but others as well!!!! Took the edge of a bit!!!!! I really love Nyx already hes so sweet and understanding and the thing with the Tatoos is so cool!!!! Do the move or did I understand that wrong?? And the flame guy is great too!!!! Did he really lighten the flames??? Wow this is all so new!!!! Like in the first chappie I often thought do I really read the same story??? But the when thouse names of King and Jester that nobody can remember the spelling of came up I tought: jep its the same story ^^ But there are really terible to spell!!! How you can write them so often and always spell them correctly is a mystery to me!!!! Well anyway thank you for the wonderful well made chappie!!!! I hope to see you again soon!!!!

Another great chapter. I like that Seathe has bit more confidence, but I`m guessing it will still be a while before he gets better.
Is seathe a half monster?
I`m a bit curious if seathe is going to end up with nyx they seem to have bonded a bit already, ot am i totally wrong?

Hope your shoulder gets better soon.
Can`t wait to read more!

I totally loved this chapter, especially how you described seathe`s emotions, I especially liked this one, I could almost imagine it.
(I could feel my ears ringing, and I swayed just slightly in shock. It had been ages since I had heard my own name, and it was like the toll of a clock that chimed right inside my own head and reverberated over and over again.)

Can`t wait to read more of your story and seathe.

hi
didnt read your other story, but I think this was a great chapter.
I want to read more and I want to know what will happen to seathe.

I really love the new version!!!! It's so much more detailed!!!! I totally love the intensity you created with this new version!!! You really feel with the chara and you can dive much deeper into the story!!!! I reallly love the new version it is really well made!!! thanks a lot for posting it and see you soon with the next chappie!!!!!

does this have the same ending ad the original?