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February 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so in awe of how so much can be captured in only 140 characters. This made me smile... :D
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February 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I see a family picnic, in an open field, near a lake, with wildflowers blooming everywhere while a young girl and her father play together with abandon and the mother indulges their whims. :D
Thanks for sharing!
Thanks for sharing!
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February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Poppy - More proof that there's life beyond the flowers! Nice family scene, and it's something that has probably happened a thousand times so the realism is there!
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February 13, 2011 at 12:00 AM
18. Poppy
That's adorable and, heh heh, a nice twist on the prompt word. It's exactly the real-life thing that makes us smile but we (non-parents at least) hardly think about otherwise. Mom's happiness is what puts the cherry on top though.
Nice job all around, you sneaky sneak. :)
That's adorable and, heh heh, a nice twist on the prompt word. It's exactly the real-life thing that makes us smile but we (non-parents at least) hardly think about otherwise. Mom's happiness is what puts the cherry on top though.
Nice job all around, you sneaky sneak. :)
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
These were great! My favorite was definitely the moon one! I've personally never tried prompts/challenges, but you did amazing. That sentence was gorgeous. =] I'm very impressed.^^
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February 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am in admiration of your insanity in working this short.
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
It takes me back decades to a summer on the beach, a boy from Germany, and those nights, wow those nights. If only we could recapture that innocent newness to everything, absolutely everything. Holding hands, a language barrier, sunkissed sand still warm even in the dark, walking barefoot in the surf, alone on the beach, laying in the sand, watching the falling stars ... okay, now the review is longer than the twitfic. :P
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I can absolutely picture this in my mind, have to wonder if they'll be making use of the darkness when the Moon's shadowed.
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
16. Moon
Aww, that's a beautifully romantic way to enjoy an eclipse. I can imagine the scene in my head as slowly panning around from seeing them lying together in the moonlight then moving behind them to take in the amazing show itself.
Aww, that's a beautifully romantic way to enjoy an eclipse. I can imagine the scene in my head as slowly panning around from seeing them lying together in the moonlight then moving behind them to take in the amazing show itself.
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January 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Prompt: Moon
What a perfect way to watch an eclipse... wonderful!
What a perfect way to watch an eclipse... wonderful!