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October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a really good beginning^^ Update soon please
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October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Darn I wish you really hadn't stopped RIGHT there >.< I was so eager to see what was going to happen to Ethan that I was on the edge of my..uh..covers yeah lol. Please continue.
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October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
It's a very good start. I hope you'll continue writing this. ^-^ I'll surely wait for more chapters.
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October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really interesting start!!! I'm eager for more!!!!
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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting I'd like to see what's going to become of young Ethan poor guy. Nice start by the way I could picture everything nicely.
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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
To short to really form an opnion. Looks promising though. :)
Write more!
Write more!
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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:) It looks good far. Update soon!
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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This story really sounds promising. I luv Ethan and Jesse's relationship. They are so cute together and Jesse waiting until Ethan is ready was so sweet. I just hope Jesse is still alive or I won't be able to read anymore of your story. Sorry. I like it but hope there is a way they both survive and Jesse saves Ethan then they get away and live happily ever after. Please. Pretty please. Update soon.
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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi, sorry, me again. I didn't mean to appear rude in my last review. I really like this story and know there will be angst in it. I know that it will be dark but I still am hoping Jesse is alive and story will end up with them escaping and being together. Pls continue. Your story is awesome.
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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This has a sort of campy rosemary's baby vibe to it, which i love! I am a sucker for a story that plays with genre fiction. Nice set up-I see all sorts of possibilities. Next chapter please.