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I love this story!! Every chapter just gets better and better, I can't wait for the next one :D

This was really great!!!! They really are kind of cute together!!!!! Hope they will stay together even after the get Jesse back!!!! Thanks a lot for the update!!! See you again soon!!!

Oh my gosh, I am really enjoying your story so much. I am anxiously awaiting the next chapter in which Atrer brings his 'pet' Ethan with him to meet 'Lord' Tresporian and the other demons and their 'pets'. I only hope poor little Ethan doesn't get himself into too much trouble and can follow Atrer's instructions. Although, something tells me he will make a big mistake (maybe when he sees Jessie again) and then have to be punished but hopefully only by Atrer. Their trip to the 'human realm' and visit to the mall was really entertaining and I loved it. I will like to see what happens when Atrer confronts her about the gem he used and what could have happened to Ethan. Also, who would think a demon and electronics? Another awesome and well written chapter, waiting for more, until then take care.

Ooops, I totally messed up my previous review, Leorie is a male demon not a female so please just ignore that whole sentence like it didn't exist. I don't know what I was doing and know it doesn't make sense. SORRY.

I'm so happy you updated! I liked this chapter. It was very good and I'll be waiting for the next one:)

That was really great!!! I really start to like thhe demon!!!! Hope to see you soon!!!

Good story so far, keep it going. It's kind of nice to see a more three dimentional demon.

Oh, I am so happy, you have updated story. Thank u so much. I am so glad Jesse is alive too. Very good chapter. I really like Atrer and how you have written him. It would be interesting to read a chapter from Jesse's point of view with the demon who is holding him prisoner. Hey, maybe the demon with Jesse really has an attraction for Atrer (and vice versa) now that would be an interesting complication. I have a feeling they may have the 'hots' for each other but don't want to admit it. Thanks again for updating.

I loved this story! It's beautifully written and seems very well organized. I can't wait for the next update.

Wow i love demon stories i hope you continue this i think im addicted already