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I stumbled upon your story after reading My Alpha. I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOVE Sacrificed. Its been a while since I read a good Demon/Human story. I so cant wait for the next chapter. I was wondering if possible if you update eithe rof your stories I would so appreciate an email update? Please and thank you. I think your stories are friggin awesome!!!!!!!!!
-A Loyal Reader

Oh My, That week is going to be hell for Ater!! My only worry is that Jesse is going to be broken by the week's end. That guy seemed too interested in taking Jesse for the week. And Ethan better bake Ater Deluxe Chocolate Chip Cookies for his sacrifices to get that kid for him. Is it obvious that I'm hooked on your story? Cannot wait to see if my fears are realized! Next update gets 1 dozen DELUXE CHOCOLATE CHIP COOKIES!!!!!

Ah this is still as good as I remembered and getting better. Can't wait to see how Jesse reacts to how cozy Ethan has been getting with the demons. If he didn't like the fact that the boy wasn't talking back then he sure wont like the fact that he's willing sleeping with one. It will also be interesting to see how Ethan reacts to Jesse's return and who will he chose to stay with.

Probably! Atrer is definitely out of his mind! Goodness! He is really one peculiar demon. But I like his character, nonetheless. Oh, and Leorie is cool, too. Though I hope he won't be antagonizing Atrer in the near future. Ooooh! I'm itching to get a hold of the next chapter! Come and update soon. You really got a very interesting plot going.

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P.S. Thanks for putting up your story, by the way. You've shared us something wonderful.

I'm loving your story <3 I hope you are able to continue writing it because you seem like a very good writer. The relationship between Atrererus and Ethan is really interesting and now that Jesse is coming back I'm sure it will be very enthralling. The only part I'm dreading is finding out what Tresporian is going to do to poor Atrererus. I know he's strong and all but he's made such a sacrifice for Ethan and I hope it will be worth it, or that Ethan at least will recognize what Atrer has done for him.

Best wishes, Lexxin

Err. FF didn't post my whole review...

I really like the way that you are able to describe the settings and people in your story without taking away from the flow of it. Also the dynamic of your characters is very interesting and entertaining. I adore the relationship between Atrererus and Ethan, and with Jesse coming back I'm sure it will be ever more fascinating. The only part of this story that I am dreading is what Tresporian has planned for Atrererus. I know that Atrererus is strong, but we all know what "affection" can weaken even the strongest of people (or demon in this case). I hope that Atrer comes out stronger (mentally) or the Ethan can truly recognize the sacrifice that Atrererus has made for him. Oh and Leorie needs to keep his wrinkly old nose out of Atrer business. Poor Jesse...

Again, great story!

Best wishes *

Hi, hope you are enjoying the weekend! I am babysitting my 3 year old niece all day today so am really pre-occupied. She is taking a nap right now so, on to my review. I wonder if Leorie is harboring secret desires for Atrereru hmm now that would be an interesting twist. I also think that Tresporian is up to no good and am anxious to find out what he has in store for our favorite demon. A week is a long time for him to torture or humilate his adversary. I also was wondering if maybe Jesse will end up with Leorie as his pet and then Ethan and Jessie could still see each other. I am getting very excitied thinking about possible pairings with Atrereru/Jessie/Ethan, and Jessie/Ethan, possibly a pairing with Leorie/Atrereru and then again the four of them sounds an interesting pairing concept. Anyhoo, as always, fabulous chapter and very well written. I felt bad for poor Jessie but have to give him credit for standing up to that demon jerk off. What goes around, comes around Tres...... maybe Jessie will have his revenge. Thanks so much for updating so quickly, I luv ya for it.

Oh no, me again, I forgot to mention that I wonder if that sword will be used agains Tres later in story. Something tells me no good will come of it.

That was really unexpected!!! I don't like this Leorie guy!!!! He is so crul!!!But well interesting chappie non the less!!!! Thank you and see you again soon!!!!

Thanks for another fast update. Atrererus is very formidable in his demon form and poor Ethan would probably have a heart attack if he saw him, especially if he witnessed his feeding frenzy. I don't think I trust Leorie after he enjoyed himself drinking Ethan's blood too much. I hope that sword doesn't cause any trouble for Atrererus later. Don't get discouraged by lack of reviews, although, you seem to be doing very well in that department anyway and please keep on moving forward with this story. I enjoy reading the Ranger's Apprentice series by John Anthony Flanagan so thus my name Will Treaty. My email address is: kahlan1986@yahoo.com