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Are you EVER going to get back to writing your WIP stories? Maybe you should just delete them so readers won't keep hoping you will one day update them! Or, maybe you can put them up for adoption and another author will continue writing them since you have abandoned them and forgot your reviewers! I SEE YOUR AUTHOR NAME LISTED UNDER AUTHORS ONLINE A LOT!

OOHHHH! This story is good! Jesse is finally back with Ethan and Atrer is looking a little jealous! I see some character development! Also, the possibility for a threesome....which would be extremely hot! I look forward to more, so please don't abandon this story!

I am really sorry and sad you have abandoned this story because I was really enjoying reading it.
I hope you are well and nothing bad has happened.

Good luck and take care. I hope you some day get back to writing because it would be such a great
waste of your incredible talent should you never write again.

W.T.

This story is awesome. So unique and well written. PLease update sooon!!!

An awesome chapter to read like always. I thought Atrer would be more possessive of Ethan or at least be more jealous but I guess hes a pretty fair and level headed demon. Also Ethan and Jesse are so cute together gahh I cant stand it the cuteness is too much for me to handle. I DEFINITELY cannot wait for the next chapter to come out. Also do you have an email list or is here somewhat I can find out when the next chapter comes out? Thanks a millions ^^ <3

Good...I noticed you like good stories so here's a recommendation. Muffin by Mahsa is one of most reviewed here, and its popularity led to a sequel...PLEASE check it out sometime!

Much welcomed bequtiful new chapter, keep em coming I shall keep looking for em lol

I really like this story. Atrer seems to get more attached to Ethan (even though he probably doesn't want to completely admit it), but I wonder how Jessie will react when he knows how the demon feeds from Ethan (even more so when they had never gone all the way and Ethan was still a virgin before Atrer came into the picture)? And let's not forget that Ethan also seems attached to the demon who keeps him prisoner... But, to Atrer's credit, he's a much nicer demon than most. It's interesting that you could make us want to see Atrer and Ethan together, even with the circumstances of their forced relationship... or is it just me?

I am really sad you haven't updated this story. I was really getting into it too. Happy New Year and I hope everything is ok with you since it's been soooooo long since and you have not continued with it. It's to bad since it's an awesome story and I loved it. (Hint, hint, hint,) Seriously take care and good luck with any future writing you do.

hi - any more yet? Im not usually into m/m but I REALLY enjoyed this.

If you can be bothered, please review my poor efforts. ('Shautor') Not much porn and not much story, but hey as I said first attempts since very young age