rate_review Reviews

I like this story so don't listen to the naysayers you don't wait the hetero relationship...but I have to admit that I love the yaoi one the best.

brilliant new chapter... please continue

hmmmm, I can't say I'm happy about the last chapter.... I mean I didn't like them sleeping with each other in the first place when they were actively trying to get with their guys...but I could deal with it because they weren't actively together...but now that they are clearly couples this is blatant cheating and just leaves a bad taste in my mouth and makes me kind of mad at both of them you know?? I mean I get Miki is trying to help aleron but she could have taken him to a sex shop and got him to pick out a few different sized dildo's up to the size of Tobius so that he could practise on his own...even I think she took it too far if she really wants Raven. I also feel bad for Tobias and Raven, they are good guys thinking they are getting great partners and they are getting sluts....Although I'm more mad a Miki I guess b/c she did kind of push Aleron into it, but he still did it (it takes 2 to tango). Sorry I couldn't write a good one for you this time, I do love the way you write and everything is easy to read and flows well together with great grammer. So I will end my rant on that good note.

I love this story .. ..... except the whole Miki and Aleron.
Kept have sex thing.. I will still keep reading it a good story well written ...

This is an interesting story. I like the characters, but don't really understand Miki sleeping with Aleron early on and now needing to prep Aleron. Really? Like the guys can't figure it out? And, it's like not a big deal to them at all that they're still being intimate while discussing their crushes? *Major squick.*

It's just quite awkward for me to read. They both have someone that they're interested in & dating...even the overshare of information (fag hag much?) I can handle, but the continued sex scenes? I'm afraid it's decreasing my interest. If there must be het, she should be getting it on w/Raven (preferably off-screen) and have more development of Aleron & Tobius.

Just my two cents, take it or leave it. :) I definitely don't mean to flame or overly criticize, just conveying my impressions. Also, the spelling issues are quite distracting, but I don't know that you need a beta. Running it through spell-check would catch a lot of them.

Keep plugging away and don't get disheartened. It's easy enough to review someone else's work, much more difficult to create the story. Cheers.

Brilliant!!! Can't wait for more

AWWWW.... So cute... can't wait for more

Soo there no chapter 9

.... Someone made off with chapter 9!!!

ummmm fyi....you didnt upload the chap