rate_review Reviews

very nice. i like how possesive tobius is..mmmm hot alpha male....yummy...and I'm glad you made it so there were no secrets between them

That was so sweet and cute! I really like your characters Tobius and Aleron. You've got something really interesting going... Keep it up. And congratulations

Those two are so cute....Raven and his were girl. I can't believe that he isn't a full vampire...what a twist.

Ah! Tobius is such a sweet boyfriend...and that thing with the ex now that will definately make some great drama later. I like how Tobius is with his daughter. Thank you for another great chapter and I can't wait for those two to have their special "time" together.

Ok, first of all, I saw your upset over bashing review...do find them pointless myself, if you have nothing nice to say just keep your mouth shut. Secondly, I love Aleron and Tobias and I would really really really love it if you focused more on them *puppy eyes* cause there was way too much Mikki and Raven in the other chapters which is why I didn't review, plus only just got my own computer back and had to sneak read at work.

Still love the story line and am really looking forward to the mpreg, and hope that you'll be lovely and actually put some preggers chapters in and baby being born. Ok well I hope you feel better and I think its awesome that you update so much and so quickly. Cause I'm really awful at that.

Ok take care, looking forward to more Aleron and Tobias, oh and could you maybe explain the ear thing with Aleron cause I don't understand it, call me stupid but since when can Vampires flatten their ears? Thank you

Huggins and a chocolate cookie

Aduial

Finally some Tobius and Aleron Time.... Lol ... this chapels was cute w/Dali in it and its explain Tobius relationship with his "Baby Mama" ....

Awwww love it!! Can't wait for more Aleron and Tobius time... X x X

Sorry but I have to say this....because at first I really loved this story now its gotten out of hand. Like any plot that their was has died and now it seems soley focused on raven and miki's sex excapades. And it is so annoying you stated that miki is not a slut that teenage girls are like that but in reality the average girl as far as I can tell is not that fowardly slutty as miki is being potrayed.
I love reading sex scenes etc... the same as the next person but their has to be some other storyline...just raven and miki have gotten so annoying.
I comend you on how quickly you put out the chapters and in the beggining of the story I saw great potential and their still is.
:)

MY GOD!!!! Miki is such a slut.... but I kinda get her personality ... but damn !!!! .... but I can't wait for the drama !!! : 3 .... keep writing because everytime you update I my day get a bit better... weather I like the chapter or not..... your a great writer. Het or Yaoi.. lol... I have question do they have Ears and Tails... because you didn't say that in that details describe them... again keep writing don't let anybody bring you down... <3

Love the new chapter.. Can't wait for more