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November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awwww... they're so cute together.. I can't wait for more
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November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Dali is just so Freackin adorable! Shame on her dead mother. Kudos for Papa-mama it's hilarious
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November 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love the last few chapters... they are all brilliant... i can't wait for more
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November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh poor Dali. Okay now person you misspelled 'concentrate' whatever you are typing on has got to have spell check so come on! But I always love coming on to AFF an seeing that your story has a new chapter, it's a guilty pleasure. Although I am wondering how Dali is going to adjust to her new parental situation. And I want to know more about Raven's parents I am in total support of that marriage. Anyway good chapter, very emotionally realing.
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October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hi just wanted to say I have been reading your story and love it! Sorry for not reviewing earlier but having just read that some people are leaving wicked and evil reviews just got me mad. You are right to delete them and ignore these horrid people. I like Miki and her relationship with Raven. I like her fiestiness and zest for life. Don't get too upset about some people not liking your characters there always will be just continue to do what you enjoy! Anyway got to read the latest chapter...did I say I love this story...
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October 31, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is the first time I have ever reviewed a story. I'm the one lurking in the back mostly. I have to say I love this story and I hope you continue on with it despite the nasties out there.
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October 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this chapter, it was an eye opener. An let me tell you I do not think Miki is a slut. But I don't think she should be having sex with Aleron now that she and Raven are together. But I can also see why she moved so fast with Raven she loved him since 6th grade, I get it.
And Miki's openess this chapter was refreshing, it shows how authentic she really is. And her little conversation with Trent was not only a bit deviant but also hilariously awkward. I like it Keep it up.
And Miki's openess this chapter was refreshing, it shows how authentic she really is. And her little conversation with Trent was not only a bit deviant but also hilariously awkward. I like it Keep it up.
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October 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant new chapters.. I love were its going and I'm really happy that Tobius and Aleron have finally taken their relationship to the next level... update soon please X X X
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
First of all, that was soo cute....Tobi. Secondly thanks for answering the questions that makes it a lot clearer (I'll be skipping the Mikki Raven chapters) Not that I don'T like them but I just love Aleron and Tobi more. :-) Maybe you could just write at the top of the chapter if its a Mikki Raven one or an Aleron Tobias, that would be really cool.
Anyway I'm glad you feel better and i still like your story.
Huggins
Aduial
Anyway I'm glad you feel better and i still like your story.
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Aduial
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October 27, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AWwwwwww.....ok don't want to miss plot, so I'll scan read it like Great Expectations or Titus Andronicus (long winded and boring both of them though last rather delightfully gruesome at times).
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