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March 6, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Vacation Juka?
That sounds reaaaallllyy nice....... *sighs*
aannyywaaaay... I wonder if Eriko will play some bigger role later on... and I again wonder about this Yoozan. It's just an itching feeling, that he's the one behind this all.... we'll see yeah.
and Shuusei....
FINALYY!
finally we learn a little bit about his past! and just from that small bit... man... man! what the shit has he been through?! and who was that, the one who was the decider on giving Shuusei the butterfly... two were involved, but one was definitely the leader.
just a glimmer of his past, and this thing is sparking back to life. whoooohooo~!
anyway, 10 days is a very long time. I guess them two got some action going on some time in those 10 days? but the last day, shuusei deny's him. because his health is getting worse!
we're gonna get to see a hospital scene i think eh? maybe maybe~
okay~ laters
- nekoii
That sounds reaaaallllyy nice....... *sighs*
aannyywaaaay... I wonder if Eriko will play some bigger role later on... and I again wonder about this Yoozan. It's just an itching feeling, that he's the one behind this all.... we'll see yeah.
and Shuusei....
FINALYY!
finally we learn a little bit about his past! and just from that small bit... man... man! what the shit has he been through?! and who was that, the one who was the decider on giving Shuusei the butterfly... two were involved, but one was definitely the leader.
just a glimmer of his past, and this thing is sparking back to life. whoooohooo~!
anyway, 10 days is a very long time. I guess them two got some action going on some time in those 10 days? but the last day, shuusei deny's him. because his health is getting worse!
we're gonna get to see a hospital scene i think eh? maybe maybe~
okay~ laters
- nekoii
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March 5, 2011 at 12:00 AM
AT first I resented this story because I thought it interfered with your last one, but the more I read this one, I get caught up in it and I don't want the chapters to end... and as always I want "more" than just one chapter. You seem to have the ability to involve your reader in both the story and the characters... until we're completely trapped in it! It’s a curious ability that rarely many so-called professional writers have. A Fan wanting more, always! G
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February 27, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hellooooooooooooooo Juka.
I'm back *scampers out of the mess of life*
This was a mundane chapter. and... confusing... just what is going on Shuusei's head eh.
At least I know - somewhat - for sure what's going on in Kirin's. But shuusei is a brand new breed of rubix cube altogether.
Going all pissy, then kissy. Hmh~ Really...
and all these going out shopping, does nobody spot them? does nobody trail them? Kirin especially. I mean, he's quite 'known' in the underworld. And Shuusei too, quite known too... these two, famous for all the wrong reasons.
But that fame should be enough to have at least ONE paparazzi, or ONE stalker on their tails. And that would be enough to disclose the location of this glass mansion. The so called, safe house.
So.... when is said bomb gonna be dropped?
All this serenity and mundaneness is driving me insane! Coz I know something else, something big, is comming... xD
Catch ya laters!
- nekoii
I'm back *scampers out of the mess of life*
This was a mundane chapter. and... confusing... just what is going on Shuusei's head eh.
At least I know - somewhat - for sure what's going on in Kirin's. But shuusei is a brand new breed of rubix cube altogether.
Going all pissy, then kissy. Hmh~ Really...
and all these going out shopping, does nobody spot them? does nobody trail them? Kirin especially. I mean, he's quite 'known' in the underworld. And Shuusei too, quite known too... these two, famous for all the wrong reasons.
But that fame should be enough to have at least ONE paparazzi, or ONE stalker on their tails. And that would be enough to disclose the location of this glass mansion. The so called, safe house.
So.... when is said bomb gonna be dropped?
All this serenity and mundaneness is driving me insane! Coz I know something else, something big, is comming... xD
Catch ya laters!
- nekoii
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February 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What's the difference between Kirin and Tanrin? I know Tanrin is his real name, but why the nick name then? OR has this been explained? Sorry I've forgotten.
and Subaru of Shigeki-ikka (ika xD squid!!!)
doe Shuusei happen to have known, or even met him before.. I get the feeling that maybe, its a yes... hmm~
There's still more to be unfolded! and I forsee Horokin-kai's demise!!! Go for it!!!
and Subaru of Shigeki-ikka (ika xD squid!!!)
doe Shuusei happen to have known, or even met him before.. I get the feeling that maybe, its a yes... hmm~
There's still more to be unfolded! and I forsee Horokin-kai's demise!!! Go for it!!!
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February 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Happy Lunar New Year~~~ *rabbit rabbit* I fell sick thanks to this new year.... Bleaaarrgh.
Still recovering now actually.
"Pride told him that as his age, he’s eaten more salt than Shuusei had drank water; but Shuusei’s reputation and history weighed on his mind heavily."
Is the salt and water thing an idiom or something?
And Yoozan Sumi is turning out to be a very suspicious character. being the saiko komon and all...
I think. it will be soon that the mole will be discovered. And then... Everything will gooo DOOOWWWNNHIIILLL!!! crash! Wow really. I wonder where this will all lead to. I can't phantom what sort of events will unfold. Even thou I do know along the way somewhere Shuusei will get kidnapped. And they will meet Kazuya~ and Chitose... and... other than that.. I have no idea..
So surprise me eh~
:D
- nekoii
Still recovering now actually.
"Pride told him that as his age, he’s eaten more salt than Shuusei had drank water; but Shuusei’s reputation and history weighed on his mind heavily."
Is the salt and water thing an idiom or something?
And Yoozan Sumi is turning out to be a very suspicious character. being the saiko komon and all...
I think. it will be soon that the mole will be discovered. And then... Everything will gooo DOOOWWWNNHIIILLL!!! crash! Wow really. I wonder where this will all lead to. I can't phantom what sort of events will unfold. Even thou I do know along the way somewhere Shuusei will get kidnapped. And they will meet Kazuya~ and Chitose... and... other than that.. I have no idea..
So surprise me eh~
:D
- nekoii
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January 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*sighs* Shuusei... it's sad how you find it strange that someone loves you for you, and not your body.
I can't wait till Kirin learns more about Shuusei's past!!! then! perhaps! he can understand why the ex-host is like that~
and Shuusei lives for another day!!! i bet he thought he'd be dead by that very time he's in bed with Kirin. heh. think ya can plan your deathdate eh? THINK AGAIN!!!
The turning in the story now, is going great~ let the excitement begin~~~ :D
- nekoii
I can't wait till Kirin learns more about Shuusei's past!!! then! perhaps! he can understand why the ex-host is like that~
and Shuusei lives for another day!!! i bet he thought he'd be dead by that very time he's in bed with Kirin. heh. think ya can plan your deathdate eh? THINK AGAIN!!!
The turning in the story now, is going great~ let the excitement begin~~~ :D
- nekoii
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
oh for gaawds sake man! He's not gonna die just yet!
Why does everyone speak as thou it's the end of the world!!!
And how could Kirin be so stupid! I knew it the moment Shuusei said it! "Stay away from the club for a week. Not even 10 blocks close" so what? so he can run away undetected~
Times like these... I feel Kirin's 'young' blood. .... xD
It's great to see ya update Juka! *hugs* I hope thing's been going well for you, new music, and stuff. Katy Perry has 2 new tracks that are dang interesting. Give it a listen if ya haven't yeah?
- nekoii
Why does everyone speak as thou it's the end of the world!!!
And how could Kirin be so stupid! I knew it the moment Shuusei said it! "Stay away from the club for a week. Not even 10 blocks close" so what? so he can run away undetected~
Times like these... I feel Kirin's 'young' blood. .... xD
It's great to see ya update Juka! *hugs* I hope thing's been going well for you, new music, and stuff. Katy Perry has 2 new tracks that are dang interesting. Give it a listen if ya haven't yeah?
- nekoii
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January 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
*Sighs* I feel... confused.
Why does this not get at least a few more reviews, instead of my name flooding the review page (I feel like a spammer now)~~~
I really don't understand the way aff readers decide if or if not they want to review. so confusing these people...
Why does this not get at least a few more reviews, instead of my name flooding the review page (I feel like a spammer now)~~~
I really don't understand the way aff readers decide if or if not they want to review. so confusing these people...
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December 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahh.... this chapter got me a bit confused.
but I guess... Shuusei is confusing.
everything he does, and says, is confusing...
he deliberately does it, doesn't he?
at least now we know how he got into Konbayoshi's "good" graces... xD
Kirin better be witty, quickly, and steal his Shuu baby away~
then the fun may start!
btw, do those two just enjoy rough sex? it's gotta be painful to some degree, for shuusei especially. *shrugs*
pain is pleasure eh? *shrugs shrugs*
- nekoii
but I guess... Shuusei is confusing.
everything he does, and says, is confusing...
he deliberately does it, doesn't he?
at least now we know how he got into Konbayoshi's "good" graces... xD
Kirin better be witty, quickly, and steal his Shuu baby away~
then the fun may start!
btw, do those two just enjoy rough sex? it's gotta be painful to some degree, for shuusei especially. *shrugs*
pain is pleasure eh? *shrugs shrugs*
- nekoii
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November 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
QUITING? WHY THE HELL IS HE QUITING! but then again.... it's good yeah, so now he's free to ELOPE with Kirin *A* yaaaaaaaaay~~~~
but.... yeah... man he's seriously dying huh..... then how? how's he gonna live a long active life with a Yakuza boss!!!???
I'm thinking. once Shuusei properly acknoeldege that he wants to live for Kirin, he'll start taking his meds.... (and develop some drug allergy. GOD NO!! gosh that would be sooooo.... stupid.... nevermind..... OTL )
aaah man.... aaaah.... anyway, Manabu is one quirky someone. Imagine! throwing your customer out, butt naked! just so you can, CHANGE UNDERWEAR?!?!??! like what the hell....
and we don't even get to read about this 'oh so great' underwear of his... sheeesh XP
hurry up with the assassination and kill someone important already... i know your just waiting for it... something big is gonna happen....
massacre? *A* lol~~!
laters
- nekoii
ps: the cologne smell on Shuusei... was from another customer wasn't it... i wonder, just who are these mysterious well paying people he sleeps with.....
but.... yeah... man he's seriously dying huh..... then how? how's he gonna live a long active life with a Yakuza boss!!!???
I'm thinking. once Shuusei properly acknoeldege that he wants to live for Kirin, he'll start taking his meds.... (and develop some drug allergy. GOD NO!! gosh that would be sooooo.... stupid.... nevermind..... OTL )
aaah man.... aaaah.... anyway, Manabu is one quirky someone. Imagine! throwing your customer out, butt naked! just so you can, CHANGE UNDERWEAR?!?!??! like what the hell....
and we don't even get to read about this 'oh so great' underwear of his... sheeesh XP
hurry up with the assassination and kill someone important already... i know your just waiting for it... something big is gonna happen....
massacre? *A* lol~~!
laters
- nekoii
ps: the cologne smell on Shuusei... was from another customer wasn't it... i wonder, just who are these mysterious well paying people he sleeps with.....