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by Juxtapositioned

schedule April 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
-"We're together because we ca".

Seriously!!! You make me so emotional every time.
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
We learn a bit more about Shuusei~~~ OwO o0o0o0o0o0o0o0ooooooohhh~~~

Someone who escaped from four kumicho with words alone and turned Kyoto upside down.
FOUR kumicho's?! Man, just how long has Shuusei been 'owned' by Kumicho's ?! He's only in his 20's now...
And his collection of tattoo's... Thou, the most impressionable one 'The -Hell- Butterfly'. Were they all 'gifts' from the four Kumicho's?
I don't know why, when ever I imagine Shuusei, it's never with those tattoo's on. I dunno why...

But.... BUT!!!
WHAT IS HE UP TO?! In the HQ of Hirokin-kai! With Yoozan as tour guide!
Shuusei, please, KILL THAT GUY! Because I'm only more sure now, that it is HIM - Yoozan - who is the mole.

Whaaaattt's gooonnaaa haaapppeeennn??? *flails arms and goes mad*

Things are heating up! It's getting damn interesting!

and btw, I personally think its just ridiculous that they let Kirin get away with just wearing a necklace! I mean, you can LOSE those sort of things! What's gonna prove his "Kumicho"-ness without it!? gods *headwall*

Please update!!! I wanna see who dies next! OwO

- nekoii
person RJaneyP
schedule April 17, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Damn! I always want more of your stories! Each presious Chapter is a gem to be totally savored and over much too soon. I want more! Greedy G
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've figured it out Juka!
It's NOT Yoozan... it's Eriko!

"Just who hated him to such a magnitude that other people’s lives no longer mattered either?"
Eriko! her bitterness at this fate she's doomed to. to never find her love because of this Yakuza marriage she's doomed to.
what would she care the other clan members, she hates them all. and most. is Kirin. the Kumicho.

but then...........
Eight days.
Three people.
One culprit.

I'm not even sure who these 3 people are?! did you mention it in the earlier chapters? ARGH! I wasn't paying close attention to the dates!

I'm on it! *researches*


- nekoii
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDD!!! JUKAAAAAAAA!!!!
(for some reason, i feel tears in my eyes for Kirin's betrayal.)

12th feb (the exchange, and the explosion)
8 days ago = 4th feb (no record of 4th fed. closest is 2nd feb)

[February 2nd, 8:49PM]
The THREE senior staff members.

Mayuzumi (who mentioned a token of commitment)

Osatami (who mentioned the crystal dagger)

Yoozan (who mentioned that it will be in Kirin's trunk)

Yoozan (who mentioned that it will be in Kirin's trunk)
Yoozan (who mentioned that it will be in Kirin's trunk)

THAT BASTARD! IT WAS YOOZAN ALL ALONG!!! OMG. OH MY GOD! OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOODD!!! JUKAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

*gasps*

PLEASE QUICKLY OUT WITH THAT NEXT CHAPTER, LET HIM BE FOUND OUT, AND MURDER HIM !!!!! BETRAYING BASTARDS MUST BE MURDERED!!!!
schedule April 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDD!!! JUKAAAAAAAA!!!!

(for some reason, i feel tears in my eyes for Kirin's betrayal.)

12th feb (the exchange, and the explosion)
8 days ago = 4th feb (no record of 4th fed. closest is 2nd feb)

[February 2nd, 8:49PM]
The THREE senior staff members.

Mayuzumi (who mentioned a token of commitment)

Osatami (who mentioned the crystal dagger)

Yoozan (who mentioned that it will be in Kirin's trunk)

Yoozan (who mentioned that it will be in Kirin's trunk)
Yoozan (who mentioned that it will be in Kirin's trunk)

THAT BASTARD! IT WAS YOOZAN ALL ALONG!!! OMG. OH MY GOD! OH MY GOOOOOOOOOOOOODD!!! JUKAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!

*gasps*

PLEASE QUICKLY OUT WITH THAT NEXT CHAPTER, LET HIM BE FOUND OUT, AND MURDER HIM !!!!! BETRAYING BASTARDS MUST BE MURDERED!!!!
schedule April 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
What decisions?!?!?! omg~~~
Shuusei. this is bad. coughing into an unconscious fit? dangerous! what if the fall had been worse and he cracked his head open on the marble floor... gooooooodd noooo.
worse thing is.... no one would discover him, till kirin finally decides to drag his ass over there.
and with the whole big assasination and mole mess going on, who knows when he's gonna be back! it's already gonna be the end of January and he hasn't come back for a visit at all.

god..... OTL

we'll see~ *sighs* how this goes. man, I really wonder where and how you're gonna bring this thing~

- nekoii
schedule April 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
haaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaai~ I knew this Yoozan was up to smomething.
it's just a matter of finding out WHAT exactly is it now.

and I've only caught up with reading this chapter now, because... *headwall*
yeah, you know, the usual.

hopefully, will get to that next chapter soon. have to head to bed now if im ever gonna get my ass back to usual life again. this flu's been nailing me in lala land.


- nekoii
schedule March 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You damn tease >.<
Now I'll be dreaming about the next ch
schedule March 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm~

just what are these two doing... this, "being at a certain location before the other just to show off their what-ever-it-is"
yakuza politics and ethics? i don't quite get it. but well... i guess it's their way of showing who is the bigger boss around here.

hm~ well.... shuusei, i hope you have enough food to last you these many days~

- nekoii