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for a moment there. as my eyes raced across the words just like my heart was. i mis-read and thought Akira died. swear, i thought i stopped breathing. i thought Akira died. and somehow, that made my heart freeze more than knowing Yoozan and Daiga dying didn't faze me. but the thought of akira dying....

okay... okay nevermind that...

THE DEED IS FINALLY DONE!

OMG..... LIKE SERIOUSLY. YOOZAN IS FINALLY DEAD. THIS IS SUCH BIG NEWS THAT CAPITAL LETTERS JUST CANNOT UNLOCK THEMSELVES AND RETURN TO SMALL LETTERS.

JUKA. YOU FINALLY KILLED THAT BUS-THIRD. FINALLY. YAY. YAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAY O_O SERIOUSLY. YAY.
AND NOW. CAN WE HAVE SHUUSEI BACK PLEASE? I THINK KIRIN NEEDS SOME COMFORT LOVIN~ ;3 *WINK WINK*

BYEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE~

- NEKOII

Perfect!!!
I was afraid of so many things but yeah, you finalized it in the most simple and fanatic way!!!

Cold hard ass chore, understand the first death, but to kill the totally innocent with guilty...I guess I'd make a truely lousy Yakuza [but at least Mr K did his own clean up and didn't assign the dirty job to someone else, I can respect that at least!
Bring the grumpy butterfly back soon, I miss him, as for Akira hope the Kids not in trouble.

PS At least you made it quick painless as possible!

WHAT THE HELL?!

North South East ! Who is coming to the West side then?!
I have no idea how this dock looks like, but, i suppose, anyone standing on either compass points will be able to see the other compass points.
Then it'll be... something interesting.

I wonder if Kirin has anyone prepared to act as the Shigeki ikka person. Huh. hah. HAH.... What the hell is going on man.... What the hell has Kirin planned in such short notice. What madness is going on in his head.
Is he even thinking right, what with still being gonked by the sudden disappearance of Shuusei.
I'm only rest assured because I know Kirin won't die yet.

okay.....

anyway. about Daiga and Akira. since they are out of the HQ... and about the new recruits, with their unknown initiation task. and about these three top seats, set to the same task, in the midst of this confusing plan...

Let's see how this all unravels. because it sounds like it's gonna be something genius.

- nekoii

chap 20.

well... this feels like the calm before the storm.
some explosions are gonna occur soon eh? quite literally. xD

Anyway. Yoozan has been put in his place. I hope their relationship will remain this frigid, so it's easier when Kirin finally needs to kill the old haggard cheating lying scheming two-faced no good TRAITOR! huff...

Akira is all settled in the clan. I guess we'll see him every now and then? who knows~

I miss Shuusei ~ Kirin is rather boring when he's alone. xD hahaaaa xD

- nekoii

I was worried that you would wait another week to update.
It was truthfully unsettling how the previous chapter ended.
Though it might just be my treacherous heart, but a part of me was afraid that
Kirin might somehow end up in the same bed as Akira for just once...
Please don't punch me >.<

I'm really glad that you updated today!! Thank you!!

Takashi Akira.
With your green eyes and brown hair...

I have hope for you. Feels like you are a potential keeper as a character. (OR perhaps I'm totally wrong and Juka's gonna kill you very soon)
BUT. If you stay Akira. I have a feeling you're gonna be part of Kirin's new Yakuza gang, and be one of his most trusted nakamas.

Now. WHERE IS SHUUSEI! He is NOT in this ENTIER CHAPTER! JUKA!!!! I know his alive, but at least tell us if he's WELL!

Waiting for the next chapter like waiting for water to boil, so it better be quick! XD A somewhat unseeming and bland chapter turns bloody interesting with this Akira appearing. I like. *thumbs up*

- nekoii

Aw man.... Aw man... It feels sorta like, my heart is aching for Kirin.
Here, he SO does not look like a Yakuza. Nor does he feel like one. He's like, some young adult, still struggling with his own insecurities, wants acknoledgement, wants comfort, denies the possibility of betrayal from his closest family-like figure, and is just so, so, lost and confused and.... SOMEONE GIVE HIM A HUG! (wait, Shuusei already did. AND LEFT HIM IMMEDIATELY AFTERWARD!) Ouch man.

But, aaaaaaaaaahh, well. He must harden furthur to face the treacherous life and role he was born into. But Kirin's heart, can never be one, that will equate to a proper Yakuza. Never. Coz then, he won't be Kirin. And he won't be able to love and care for Shuusei.

Ne?

Kirin's emotional factor in this chapter, somehow, managed to overcome the reveal of Shuusei's illness. (YES! FINALLY! A DIAGNOSIS!) So it was his lungs all this while huh? Here I was thinking it was his heart. Cardiac something. Instead of Pulmonary something. Ah well. What ever it it. He's going for some life and death sugery and leaving Kirin with that drop of the bomb on a vulnerable day of his life...

This is not gonna equal to something good in the end. (hahah, 'in the end' xD")

We shall see *rubs hands*

BRING ON THE HEAVY ARTILLERY! I'm ready for it >3

- nekoii

OH YEAH! I NEARLY FORGOT!

*jumps up* I WAS RIGHT ALL ALONG! *point finger at a certain old prune backstabbing bus3rd*

YOOZAN

“The mole in your clan, it’s your saiko komon.”

AHA!

Shuuuuuuuuuuuseeeeeeeeeeeeeiii! Dinner?! What about the operation?! *headwall*

But knowing that guy, he'd sooner confess his undying love to Kirin than tell him he was going for an operation to prolong his life for Kirin because he was dying and didn't want to die yet because he wanted to life, for Kirin.
Hah!

We'll see how this goes. My vote is still on "Yoozan is the Traitor"

and of cause ;3 the operation will go smoothly ;) eh~ eh~ EH?

- nekoii