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OMG I have so many questions. Like why Akira took it...and HWY theHELL love is blooming even though it's one sided. I strongly believe in you and hope that the love Akira harbor now won't ever turn mutual.

I miss Shuusei ! when is he going to be back? its been a while. I hope Kirin and Akira don't get together. I don't think they would match well, Akira doesn't really understand the whole yakuza thing, and just fumbles around.

I want those star ceilings. My ceiling's nothing interesting, so I stare out my tiny window where a small square of blue sky can be seen.

Anyway. I forgot that Kirin's room hadn't any doors till it was re-mentioned in this chapter. xD Cool, doors for privacy. Seeing as maybe, perhaps, with Shuusei back...... hopefully. something. ah what am I saying *rubs head* aaaaah, my brain isn't working well. I've got tons of assignments to get done X___X

I hope Kirin'll take better care of his health. Lest it be him the one who needs an operation next.
And I wonder if this new unfolding of events would prove advantageous to Kirin. Or, to Subaru perhaps.

- nekoii

If you ever had a true relationship with a cat, you know how important they are... truly LOL! You haven't lived until you have been yowled at and scolded by your cat for various infractions and so-called slights... relentless mad kitties take no prisoners, just like your vicious Yukkie gangsters.

The Kid Akira is like a distracting innocent Angel of truth, second guessing and judging the big boss', decisions ... a counter point to the usual violence ,a foil of conscious! Certainly not a love interest though! Always looking forward to more story and even more after that! Sincerely, your fan G

When will Shuusei return???

Heeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeyyy.... *clambers from underneath a pile of books and handouts and lectures and tutorials*

Uh....... I have no energy. I'm sorry it's reflecting back out in my review. And whoa, did I miss the previous update or what. Coz there's like two chapters O_O

Who was it owning the flower shop? One of the big three right. Hah. funny.
It's neutral ground, why the heck do they kick a fuss for and break windows. sheeesh. some Yakuza activities, I can never understand. What a waste of resources and good material man.

Akira's back in the picture.

So is the 'glass mansion'.

But Shuusei's still not here =(

How about quick scene with Kirin and his other serious relationship? Why don't the big boss get along with Kitty, does Kitty miss his butterfly? Enjoy the little detail things in this story, they constantly keep me interested and as usual make me want more. LOL G

I haven't been paying close attention to the dates.
How long has it been man....
Since Shuusei's departure.
Since the assassination attempts.
Since... everything.

Wow. Feels rather hollow and dark now that all the killing has been done.

and I can't remember the scene that involved Kirin, Konbayoshi-Senior and Shuusei.
What was it... argh...

What's to happen now Juka? It feels as though this entire story will be shroud in darkness and gloomy angst. Will it? Will there be NO spark of happiness as there was in Heaven Far Away?
I can't help but think it's so depressing!!!! X_X

Shuusei~~~ please come back! You bring so much colour into this story and I miss you already~~~ Even Akira, who initially was a pleasant addition, has become annoying, what with his lack of knowledge on the serious Yakuza matters. And Kirin is all gloomy. Then this whole "Riki" person is thrown into this equation, for what purpose? What information would Kirin possibly WANT/NEED?

Information like...... Where to find Shuusei? *W*
I hope so~

I'm starting the 'Bring Shuusei Back' Campaign. BSB ^^ haha~

- nekoii

wow, this story is actually quite good, although when I read the summary I didn't realize it was a yakuza story, but it made me even more happy since I have a weakness for mafia stories :P this story is very interesting, the way you portrayed Shuusei and Kirin, who is the most unconventional kumicho I've ever imagined! Now I'm just wondering if Shuusei will appear again or if he simply died. It would sadden me to see him disappear, he and Kirin are truly the perfect couple combination. I'm also curious about Akira's role in all of this, he's a new character that appeared literally out of nowhere and I thought for a second he and Daiga would be another couple but since you killed Daigo...
I actually suspected Yoozan was the traitor since the beginning, because he was just so opposed to Shuusei and Kirin's being together without really revealing what he knew about Shuusei, so... it wasn't a surprise for me :) This story is so good, keep up the good work!

Yo How about lets have a break from the bloody YUkie gangster stuff, and learn how the sick butterfly is making out with the medical profession, but I suppose that can be truly yuky too, for I spent some time under the knife, along with the following crapy recover period afterwards, only thing glorious about it was luckily I was able to return to regular life. G