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LOL About F'n time you brought the cat back. You know how the cat's likes to chase butterflys that are just out of reach. Well hurry up, you know I am waiting for every last chapter, so why can't you put one little Chapy out a day, In the end, just for me G your fan

Hello again!
I'm being very bad reading this now. But since I finished one paper, and the next paper is on friday. I thought I'd give myself a treat before hitting the books again.

Updates. UPDATES!!!! I am chapters behind! =O
and to think I used to be waiting and waiting for each chapter, now I have so many to read!!!

Akira sure is................. interesting.... I wonder what goes through his mind. his monologue. I wonder~

*next chap!*

c.27.

Ouh............

ouh.............. O_______O . uhm.............

What?

did.... did Kirin just..... like.... take Akira's virginity, without , without care? Wha.... How...... Ah.......
WHAT???

WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTTT??????

c.28
Aw man. I really don't know what to say about Akira and Kirin being sex-partners. Because that's all it is.
Akira's just setting off to get his heart broken. He's just fallen for the man who saved him without actually knowing what he set him heart out to.
I just *sigh exasperatedly* at this hopeless situation. This can NEVER turn out well!

and then Shinya pops out , out of now where! and is looking for Shuusei?! HEY! Keep ya nonchalant emotionless paws OFF! Shuusei is taken! and currently MISSING. Do us all a favour and find him, and RETURN him to this Kirin who's gone psycho and is sleeping with some minor!

Urgh.... the horror of Yakuza life.
*eye twitch* but it is such, their lifestyle. Hm.
Hm.

Hm.

*next chapter*

Ooooooooooooooooooooooohhhh someone's hear to sweep Eriko off her feet? :D
or to kill her? X_X

Honestly, I'd rather have Eriko out of the picture in her own happily ever after. No need to get anymore virgin's messed up in this Yakuza mess... god only knows how many actual virgins are already caught up in their messes.

I don't know much about the present-day Yakuza activities in Japan... but... Really? That thing with the head's felt more like world war II and trust me I know, it's in my local history books. It's Japan. and Asia after all.

"Kirin supposed he could always go to Akira, it was convenient and free of charge, but his taste begged for a change." *shakes head* Akira, get your heart out of it. quickly.
"So even if at the end of the evening Shinji was bleeding from all holes possible, Kirin could still dump a stack of cash and walk out as if he had never been there at all." Oh god. Akira get your heart, body and soul out of there!

I dunno WHAT to think about Kirin anymore! He's like.... he's become like..... A Yakuza.....
Yeah, I know he IS a yakuza BOSS at that. but... he's never really behaved, nor felt like one. not until Shuusei left him, and he killed Daiga and dad. then it was like.... true blue Yakuza all the way man...

man. yeah........... okay.... now I feel too sleepy to study. crap.... at least I've caught up with your updates~

Heeeeeeeee :D

At least the kid Akira is warned... About his competition. Gee their little war of the Yuks is starting to get a little messy. I wouldn't find it amusing, to find a severed head on my front lawn! Bullets are a lot more cleaner!
Gslinger

I hope this is never going to end. When I first read the headline of the new chapter I became all teary and womanish. I thought the name meant that Shuusei was going to return but well, I'm VERY content with what has happened in this chapter and how things are progressing.

Seriously I like Akira less and less. Much to the point of hating him. But
it felt good that the sex was mindless!!!

Shuusei, when will he be back?
I've forgotten who the person was before Subaru in the end...

U fooled me I didn't think that was going to happen, between him and the new kid, so the boy was a substitute after all, personally I'd perfer more interaction with the cat! Nasty Evil gangsters can never keep it in their pants, so perhaps he should sell the kid now, when the butterfly comes back or their might be jealousy untold . G