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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Instead of I love you, for someone like him who had been hardened by yakuza, he wanted to hear three different words.
What?
and SHINYA is back too!!!
and SHUUSEI's BEING STALKED!!! HELP!!!
What?
and SHINYA is back too!!!
and SHUUSEI's BEING STALKED!!! HELP!!!
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September 29, 2011 at 12:00 AM
chpa 35
wow. January 3rd... what a loaded date~
^__________^
and Kirin's being so nice.... and Shuusei goes and CHEATS ON HIM!?!?! HE CHEATED?!?!? HE's GONNA SLEEP WITH SHINYA?!?!??! WHAT THE FICK!!?!?!? WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTT?!?!?!
wow. January 3rd... what a loaded date~
^__________^
and Kirin's being so nice.... and Shuusei goes and CHEATS ON HIM!?!?! HE CHEATED?!?!? HE's GONNA SLEEP WITH SHINYA?!?!??! WHAT THE FICK!!?!?!? WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAATTT?!?!?!
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September 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Juka, I'm baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaacccckkk~~~~ *gives you an eerie smile*
and I'm tired. someone please sue the idiot who came up with evening exams. stupid git. thank god it's over. I feel so drained now. gaaaaaah.
anyway. review!
AHAH! somehow, that was expected wasn't it. For Subaru to hit on Eriko. Though.... really now... I have faith that Eriko would remain her alliance with Hirokin-kai. after all, blood is thicker than water. With her brother there and all... however, should little brother die..... that would spell a different story.
nevermind that. (perhaps Eriko's -my hunch- allegiance with Subaru after the supposed death of lil brother is what causes Kirin's downfall . which ought to lead up to that scene where kirin and shuusei are running.)
again. nevermind that.
Goodness. this whole nonsense of gang fights... I'll never quite understand the logic behind such a horrendous WASTE of EVERYTHING. It's illogical. no matter how 'dramatic' and 'cool' it may seem, its really nonsense. I dunno, that's just my 'smarts' talking. *shrugs shrugs* I guess you'll never really understand it unless you're in a gang yourself.
and then. Akira... akira akira.... I have a friend name'd Akira (a girl though).... and it's always been a bit distracting. Thank god you don't have an Izumi, or a Masahiro. =__= then you'd be getting me thinking of your story everytime I think of my friends. Don't use those names please. xD hahaha, unless you already have them in your plot down the line. xD
but ok back to your Akira. jeez.... when will this kid give up? he KNOWS his just in this for a heartbreak... and I have some sinking feeling you're gonna kill Akira... and he's just a sad sad poor innocent kid who'd be so much more better of in foster care, or something, like a soup kitchen, or a shelter.... or. i dunno... just not, NOT, in a Yakuza establishment..... *Sighs* Akira...
Urgh....
okay, my eyes can't hold up. I'll continue my review rampage tml~~~ wait for it! XD
- nekoii
and I'm tired. someone please sue the idiot who came up with evening exams. stupid git. thank god it's over. I feel so drained now. gaaaaaah.
anyway. review!
AHAH! somehow, that was expected wasn't it. For Subaru to hit on Eriko. Though.... really now... I have faith that Eriko would remain her alliance with Hirokin-kai. after all, blood is thicker than water. With her brother there and all... however, should little brother die..... that would spell a different story.
nevermind that. (perhaps Eriko's -my hunch- allegiance with Subaru after the supposed death of lil brother is what causes Kirin's downfall . which ought to lead up to that scene where kirin and shuusei are running.)
again. nevermind that.
Goodness. this whole nonsense of gang fights... I'll never quite understand the logic behind such a horrendous WASTE of EVERYTHING. It's illogical. no matter how 'dramatic' and 'cool' it may seem, its really nonsense. I dunno, that's just my 'smarts' talking. *shrugs shrugs* I guess you'll never really understand it unless you're in a gang yourself.
and then. Akira... akira akira.... I have a friend name'd Akira (a girl though).... and it's always been a bit distracting. Thank god you don't have an Izumi, or a Masahiro. =__= then you'd be getting me thinking of your story everytime I think of my friends. Don't use those names please. xD hahaha, unless you already have them in your plot down the line. xD
but ok back to your Akira. jeez.... when will this kid give up? he KNOWS his just in this for a heartbreak... and I have some sinking feeling you're gonna kill Akira... and he's just a sad sad poor innocent kid who'd be so much more better of in foster care, or something, like a soup kitchen, or a shelter.... or. i dunno... just not, NOT, in a Yakuza establishment..... *Sighs* Akira...
Urgh....
okay, my eyes can't hold up. I'll continue my review rampage tml~~~ wait for it! XD
- nekoii
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August 23, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Reality is sharp dagger and it cuts very deep, and it makes your face run wet. Memories of what could have been blind your eyes and force you to your knees, as you shout out. WHY? Reality is for the strong, not for the weak. So,"In the End", such is my foolish weakness I cry out in pain, for I perfer, rather, the fantasy, fairy tale, and the rare fleeting things like eternal love, that alas, can never be!
You're not suppose to make me cry, G
You're not suppose to make me cry, G
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August 22, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh crap when are they going to realize they can't do without each other... hope its soon! G
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August 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Boy are you confusing me? I can't tell whither Shuu shot Toru, because he thought his tail was sent to kill him,[Why would he think Kirin would do that] or was it the other guys,sent from that sadist the big bad Kobster who were sent to capture him, but how did they get a hold of Shuu's gun. If you mean for things to be totally confusing... well damn-it all, it is... and you succeeded. Slowly pulling hair out, G
PS I hope it, "in the end" it turn out like I think it will, otherwise I'll be disapointed, G pouting
PS I hope it, "in the end" it turn out like I think it will, otherwise I'll be disapointed, G pouting
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August 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hello
I'm me again :P
Can you please tell when the story is about to end like three chapters beforehand?
I know I'm in love with this story and writing style and looks forward to the update everyday like nuts. Hope you don't mind that I'll be stalking you in the future.
Miko
I'm me again :P
Can you please tell when the story is about to end like three chapters beforehand?
I know I'm in love with this story and writing style and looks forward to the update everyday like nuts. Hope you don't mind that I'll be stalking you in the future.
Miko
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August 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Eriko is cool, She knows exactly what She's getting into and I wouldn't be surprise if she didn't know about Shuu too. Hope she gets the respect and the happiness she deserves, with out her head being buried in the sand and believing in false pretenses... its always better to know the truth... in the end... and easier to live with. G
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
The last sentence did me!!
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August 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
LOL How practical, no nasty money needs to be involved. Something tells me if Kirin finds out about this little deal, Kitty wont be only one that has a nasty scatching fit... and I see our recovered butterfly Shuu likes to take chances and live on the edge, and I have no doubt that he knows very well how to use the pretty gun the boss give him. G