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c.40.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAH!!! wow. this is some sorta interesting~!
I've always fancied this sorta scenario. Some big shot guy, who's virtually unbeatable, get's turned to a begging mess when his LOVED ONE is captured..... very very interesting~~~~ :D

This Ayumi woman is an immediate favourite! ;)

WAH! im leaving a quick one here coz i stayed to long to read n now will be late!

but.

WAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHH!!! OMG!!!!!

this. only THIS now feels like THE BEGINNING!

grah grah grah omg! OMG! What the heck man!!!!! it's whapt? chap 40! and things are only FINALLY GETTING REALLY EXCITING!!!!
you've got some weird style of your plot planning, what ever style it is. but it WORKS.
bloody build up. i forgot for awhile why i though you were so awesome. GRAH im reminded in extend now!

ok. gtg. catch the next chap lter ;)

I was chanting 'Akatsuki akatsuki akatsuki' in my head otw to work. xD
and now, I'm back!

c.42
“Oh? Don’t tell me you’ve suddenly gotten shy~!”
“Don’t tell me you suddenly want to be castrated.”
Oh! The friendly banter! Gwahaha! XD

how nice. a holiday :D
such sappy people they are xD

c.43.

AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!! CHITOSE! CHITOSE!!!! *flails* CHITOSE! ITS CHITOSE!!! a YOUNG Chitose!!!!

OwO heheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee~~~

c.39.

right person. wrong time... i wonder why wrong time.
this 'riki' person sounds familiar... hmmmmmmm.... my memory is failing me~

and im real slow in catching up here x___x damn life and its bustle of BUSY-ness and distractions. ho.

SHUUSEI IS IN THE GAME!

c 38.

Ah........... wow........... how old was he again... thirteen... man. that gives the ill omen number a brand new look. and URGH. god URGH! i had to quickly skim through that part. something about fingernails (particularly when they are involved in torture) just SQUICKS me like crazy. x____x!

but man.... I feel like, Akira should step it up.
as a man. He should make something out of himself. and not be just that person Kirin would go looking for release when wifey and lover is away~

hmmm well.... I still don't quite get where the butterfly tattoo came from, seeing as how it was there prior to shuusei meeting any Yakuza. But well, it turned out. It was him who seeked the Yakuza out. Mad lil nutcase he is. I wonder if he ever regretted that moment in his life, years later when he finds himself subjected to torture.

the need to murder every translater and real state agent they come by... is still quite disturbing.
and Shinya's finally got that bastard yeah... hehe~

and what was that deal with Shuusei just sitting there! in a shirt! in front of the 3 big shots of hirokin kai AND Akira!? *headwall* gods... Akira... Akira... has your hear shattered enough for you to be more careful next time you had that porcelain thing over so blindly?

chap 32.
My, my Chitose. So young yet sooo sooo enchantingly intriguing arn't you.

... Chitose... goodness, you brought him into the story already~ Wow~ and THIS YOUNG! oh god... What's become of the world...

hundreds of people dead in the streets. under-aged sex slaves. yakuza's falling in love with 'LOST' lovers.... gwah...

chapter 33.

Shuusei's back. you don't have to spell it out for me. I know it's him.

And what the hell of a greeting dude?!?!?! Where's the "running from a distance and jumping into his arms" part I missed?!

What "Your fucking death" ?!?!??! The hell?!?!?!?
and THE HELL again!!! Akira! you, like, IDIIOT?! or what?!