rate_review Reviews

I dig the plot. I knew a guy like that in High School, but the grammar and spelling errors really take away from the story. If you are unable to spell/grammar check, you may want to check into a beta. Beyond that, I think its a great start, and I can't wait to read more. I think its a good start and could go a great many directions.

Great first chapter!

Tath

Interesting, do continue. :)