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for Heartless prick with puppy dog eyes

by Lilmissgg

person Timaria
schedule November 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
<3
person ramen_squirrel
schedule November 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. It's oddly intreging but since it's only 3 chapters I can't really pin down what I like about it specifically just that I would like to read more. Btw if you're gonna abandon this story can you give me a heads up as I would like to know if I should delete this from my bookmarks or not. Don't get me wrong I would really like you to continue it's just the chapters have a long time between them and there's only so many hours in the day for me to be wasting my time on something that will likely be abandoned. So I would be grateful for the heads up. Again love the storry and hope for it to continue.
person lovelyl
schedule November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ah high school drama don't miss that. LOL! Great to see a update. :D
schedule November 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww poor Mel; she has it bad! lol

But maybe instead of Chris, she'll find out that she likes Tony more! hahaha

person lovelyl
schedule November 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh come.... I demand more of this... please????? LOL!
person that'sjustit
schedule October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
ok, i'm about to cry. . .he kinda had me goin there, had me thinking that just maybe...
then he just had to fucking smirk at Sky. funny thing i know a girl named Sky and she's a tanorexic way-to-much-make up-wearing boyfriend stealing slut with obsessive behavior ... I'm sensing some similarities here :)
person :]
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I haven't come on this site for a while now and I'm glad to have come across your story :).
The storyline so far is great, & I cannot wait for the next chapter. Looking forward to it. Keep it up.

-H
person Sarah
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Must have more!!!!
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm happy you are re-releasing this. I hope people take a peek because the little I've read I really like. . . alot!
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh my gosh, it's soo funny! i love it!! update soon!