rate_review Reviews

I really like this story, I hate that its not complete,,,just cuz I hate having to wait lol. I like and hate all the twists too they're good in the way that they make me go through all the movies such as her bollywood movies lol. I want her to get with him (obviously) but I do think it should be longer (like 20 chapters haha) maybe more tony (yuri?). Im going to go read your other story(s?) until a new chapter is out.

Thx for not giving up on this one I really like it *hugs* Re-kio

That last chapter really did make me cry T.T
very evil of you. But I guess if the reader gets emotionally
attached then it means you're a good writer! ;)
I am loving this story by the way. It's the most.. down to earth
story I've read in a loong time.
Ooo I wonder what gonna happen in the next chappie, when
he sees her in her 'skimpy' pjs ^^ cheeky twist!
Please update sooner than later
(one of the things I hate; finding a brill' story and then
the author doesn't update for over a month!)
so please keep up the Wicked Writing!
Can't wait to see what happens :)
xMoonlitx

thanks for the update! but it is too short! lol I always try to scroll for more haha! Ahhh poor Mel; can't wait to see how she gets through it. And her dad is such a douchebag (as mentioned before)! And you tease! You left us hanging right before the 'good parts' lol!! Anyways thanks again and can't wait for more :)

Poor kid the guilt she will be feeling, not good.

The nitey seen should be funny. Little Chris might pop up for a visit. ;) Lol!

Oh man, i just about cried! I really hope you update soon! I am so enthralled i dont want to stop reading! I hope everything turns out okay for Mel...Please update!!! I love this story so far.

whoa...well if that isn't the most....melancholic? encouraging? bittersweet...suicide note I've ever read! Strangely, it was almost comforting (yet very sad still). But I think you did a good job explaining the mother's reasons in regards to Mel. For a paraplegic or a person with a degenerative neuromuscular disorder, a suicide isn't as 'heartless or selfish' as one may originally think. I think there were probably other reasons too besides wanting to hold her daughter back (comment about her feeling like an invalid)...for most of us being 'stuck' like that is unimaginable and it really is such a emotionally painful physical condition. It's a huge hot topic in health care now. While I am saddened by her death I guess I can understand where she is coming from. So I look forward to seeing how Mel's going to handle not having the emotional support there. And what's going to happen with her father? Wonder if he still feels guilty or he's still a prick! And will Chris redeem himself or desert her in her greatest time of need? I'm super looking forward to this! You definitely built this story enough to take it many directions! Good job :)

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!!!!! how COULD you! Bad Lilmissgg, BAD! (sprays with water-bottle) I'm not fully aware of what happens,nor am i as naive as Chris! here i was thinking you were going to something stupid like- No! i can't say, you might use it against me- gurrrrrr I'm having a Mean Girls moment and i keep picturing pushing SOMEONE (who shall remain unnamed but HER name starts with a R has 4 letters in it and shares her name with a candy-bar and is just as sweet!) into a speeding bus!

*sigh* no she's just too sweet, I'll settle for a simple falling down the stairs && a flip-flop of roles Chris && Mel . . . .and Ruth as the "gal pal" you could even hook her up with Tony!

ty! best updater of me ever! aw what happened at work? /= sorry to hear :( crazy twist but good, makes more interesting. and totally believe in if it's meant to be, it'll happen. or i use that when i don't approach cute guys aha. i kinda don't get the diff either between "i fuckin love u but i'm not in love with u /=

no need to hide, but i'm scared about helen, maybe she left the house on her own? but it would provide a way for chris and mel to get closer. ruth seems cool. idk i feel like meb i would hv told her yes i hv feelings for him. i like that chris was prob a lil jel at the first mention of tony. can't wait for more xxxx

I love this story but I just wish it was updated a little more often. I love the way the characters are believeable and that you don't know much but can still kinda guess from Mel's pov. The twists are fine but I just get the perpetual feeling that this fic is gonna be abandoned by you so I don't want to invest myself in it too much. Buck up and gain some confidence! This is a good fic and no one is perfect when they write, do you know how many drafts even seasoned writters go through? I believe in you and hope that you update quicker and finish this story. Thank you.