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May 4, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Please finish this story...it's really great, but I'd love to see the rest. Because at last count Chris is still with the other girl. What's going to happen? And who does he choose?
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April 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Wow! I'll be waiting for the next chapter, and your loving scene wasn't bad at all.
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April 25, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I was so excited when I seen it was updated <3 I really love this story. Being the first time you wrote het sex it wasnt bad
I couldnt tell it was the first time you wrote it ^^ Now imma be all anxious about what happens "tomorrow" ...isnt he still
with his "dream girl" that just moved there and shiet? He should dump that chick X@
I couldnt tell it was the first time you wrote it ^^ Now imma be all anxious about what happens "tomorrow" ...isnt he still
with his "dream girl" that just moved there and shiet? He should dump that chick X@
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
this was a really good scene
i find it hard to believe it was your first
KEEP IT UP
i love this story
i find it hard to believe it was your first
KEEP IT UP
i love this story
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
hey I'm still following :) Ahhh although het sex is not my cup of tea usually it wasn't too bad and worked with the story :) really curious about their reactions next chapter and how much this is going to change everything. I kinda expected Chris to turn her down actually but I guess we'll find out what happens. looking forward to more :)
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Woohoooo Mel! Go Mel, go mel, go, go, go mel.... ^______^ °and go chris guess.
Wow I really love you for this chapter -&& not even for the sex, which was pretty good. Mel finally told/showed him what she was all about even if it was durning a mental-break, well if there's any regrets in the morn she can always plead insanity
Wow I really love you for this chapter -&& not even for the sex, which was pretty good. Mel finally told/showed him what she was all about even if it was durning a mental-break, well if there's any regrets in the morn she can always plead insanity
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Well the sex scene was hot, for a minute there I thought oh no Chris is going to back away....AGAIN! But me thinks he will the day after.
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April 24, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I thought you have given up, I'm happy that you didn't,
please please continue!!!
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March 16, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I've really enjoyed what I've read so far. I fell in love with my best friend - We are getting married in April. So I can sympathise. You are doing a great job of portraying this. keep writing.
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March 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my gosh... I haven't cried over a story in a long time. These last two chapters had me bawling like a baby. :( Poor Mel.... And Chris is an asshole for not seeing how she's feeling, when everyone else can see it.