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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Brilliant.
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October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You gotta work on grammar and spelling, otherwise this is a fine story.
Dialogue should be on separate lines if it's spoken by different characters.
Dialogue should be on separate lines if it's spoken by different characters.
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October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I don't think it's possible to not be hot and bothered after that. Magnificently steamy! Excellent work.
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October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Absolutely amazing.
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September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
tsk tsk tsk.... very hot and bothered indeed. A simple fuck is nice once in awhile *wink*. Well im liking the story so far, hopefully we could see the plot thickening in the upcoming chapters!