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for Eilaan Ex Machina

by jennipea

person m_kren2
schedule March 11, 2013 at 12:00 AM
love it, i want more is so good.
person Kip
schedule October 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow! Amazing. I'm already hooked, drawn helplessly into your weave and left to wonder what is to come... Kit is so believable and so very energetic! Will doesn't know what he has let himself in for, although he wasn't exactly offered a choice was he? Shef and Zane are emerging as characters in their own right, and with the story beginning to pick up pace I can't wait to see what is in store. Waiting in eager anticipation, 'Purr
person kylee123
schedule October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for the new chapter. Kit certainly is a bundle of energy. I have to wonder about Willen's reaction to Kit's story. I wonder if the name Calen is someone he knew in the past. I can't wait to read some more. Kit is definitely going to create quite the stir - in a good way- when he gets to Ruxe.
schedule October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story! Your character, Kit, is so cute and the other characters are intresting. I can't wait till the next chapter!
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice beginning. I hope Mama and the family have not been killed. It seems she was afraid of something when she sent Kit away. Loving the story so far.
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOW! a great beginning! I just read the first 3 chapters! I love your characterisation... and yes I can see how this is gonna be a long story! but you got my attention! lookin forward to how the story unfolds!
person kylee123
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely story. I already love little Kit. I can't wait to read some more of this.
schedule September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting beginning and I can't wait for the next chapter!