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September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
CandyCaner, another awesome chapter. You've got me into that Counting Crows song now!
Favourite part by far is the ending. I mean, it's just so...simple. And Jamie and Gabriella get to have such a cute moment and just enjoy the music together and cuddle on the couch. "In that little moment, it felt as though nothing had been different. Nothing had changed. And we sat there, holding each other close, listening to the song repeat over and over." Perfect line. What more can you ask for?
And for the record, I think we'll be seeing more of this Anne Boucher. Maybe she'll put a wrench in Jamie and Gabriella's relationship! :O Hopefully that doesn't happen, but I'm pretty sure things are only going to get a lot more complicated from here.
Oh, as a side note, I am SO happy that your writing is free of errors and things like that. It makes things SO much easier to read and it's more enjoyable when you don't have to deal with poor grammar and spelling. You rock girl!
Favourite part by far is the ending. I mean, it's just so...simple. And Jamie and Gabriella get to have such a cute moment and just enjoy the music together and cuddle on the couch. "In that little moment, it felt as though nothing had been different. Nothing had changed. And we sat there, holding each other close, listening to the song repeat over and over." Perfect line. What more can you ask for?
And for the record, I think we'll be seeing more of this Anne Boucher. Maybe she'll put a wrench in Jamie and Gabriella's relationship! :O Hopefully that doesn't happen, but I'm pretty sure things are only going to get a lot more complicated from here.
Oh, as a side note, I am SO happy that your writing is free of errors and things like that. It makes things SO much easier to read and it's more enjoyable when you don't have to deal with poor grammar and spelling. You rock girl!
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September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
nyaaa ^^ sooo cute i love it! though Anne strikes me as someone to watch out for... and i get the feeling that it was lesley who attacked her (but a possibility could be that Anne attacked her and Lesley was the one to save her, i guess i have to wait to find out)
keep up the great work and don't stress yourself out too much! XD
keep up the great work and don't stress yourself out too much! XD
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September 30, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Really great chapter. It's really sweet. Made me feel all flutter-y on the inside XD.
Will be looking forward to the next chapter :D.
Will be looking forward to the next chapter :D.
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September 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow... I'm like 80% suspicious of this Anne person now. Admittance that she saw the attacker but stayed with Jamie. Good of her, but that makes her the good old "First witness, first suspect". The chapter was very good length and I quite like that the memory loss is still being carried, rather than dropped by mistake like some beginner writers might do. Gabie is becoming quite good at being the leader, but my goodness... driving without a license, naughty naughty girl.
Awesome chapter. Good job Candy. This one is looking to be very good.
Awesome chapter. Good job Candy. This one is looking to be very good.
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
As always Ms.Caner, you give us all a bit more of your literary talent. Such a sweet sad chapter, filler or not. You make me want to try my hand at a F/F pairing for my next story thats trying to work itself out in my head. Can't wait for more. Love ya, Love.
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely filler chapter. Makes me really reconsider the idea of who attacked Jamie. Plus it was sweet and you can see the still nervous old Gabby, uncertain and just trying to do her best to be in a relationship, while Jamie remembers the struggles and how she possibly desires to have been there to either seriously beat up or kill the guys who raped Gabby.
Very good writing as always Candy. Thank you for the sweet filler chapter. Looking forward to the bigger chapter next.
Very good writing as always Candy. Thank you for the sweet filler chapter. Looking forward to the bigger chapter next.
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
D: Poor Jamie and Gabby. I hope what had happened to Jamie won't affect their relationship >:
Great chapter as usual. Will be looking forward to the new update ' v'.
Great chapter as usual. Will be looking forward to the new update ' v'.
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
a filler with feeling. nice. I can't complain 'bout these short little things, they do keep the story going, and sometimes you get an insight to something that might not have been mentioned in a regular chapter.
I look forward to the next update. Hopefully it comes on a day where I can sit here without having to chase down my son or work my ass into a nervous fit because I burned so much time online reading. :)
I look forward to the next update. Hopefully it comes on a day where I can sit here without having to chase down my son or work my ass into a nervous fit because I burned so much time online reading. :)
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just wow.
Ok, not, "just wow," but eh. Even though it was a filler chapter, I enjoyed reading it. Always have to have a dream sequence eh? :P
I think my favourite part was when Gabriella got into bed with Jamie and was asked if she was crying in the hallway. I mean, people would think, "Poor Jamie, she was attacked and almost raped!" but there is also Gabriella to consider as well. She went through that and more, and now has to see the one she loves be subject to some of that. She must really be hurting.
Anyway, I love your writing and fantastic job as always! I think I'll be reviewing now :D
Ok, not, "just wow," but eh. Even though it was a filler chapter, I enjoyed reading it. Always have to have a dream sequence eh? :P
I think my favourite part was when Gabriella got into bed with Jamie and was asked if she was crying in the hallway. I mean, people would think, "Poor Jamie, she was attacked and almost raped!" but there is also Gabriella to consider as well. She went through that and more, and now has to see the one she loves be subject to some of that. She must really be hurting.
Anyway, I love your writing and fantastic job as always! I think I'll be reviewing now :D
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September 28, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ugh... i reviewed and realized that they didn't post it... -_-'... nyaa, now i can't remember what i wrote *teardrop*,
I loved the chapter, and i really wanted more... the dream scared me a bit though (your writing style's to blame her again, but that's a good thing.) and i really want more Gamie goodness, (i won't rush you though)
I wonder about the gender of the attacker, whether it was female or male is the real question, i mean, it could have been the chick she nearly ran over before, (who in turn could've been lesley...) or it could be drew... or one of the guys from Gabby's past who happened to see her with gabby (just a thought)
whatever you do, (once you're in the mood) Don't Stop Writing!
I loved the chapter, and i really wanted more... the dream scared me a bit though (your writing style's to blame her again, but that's a good thing.) and i really want more Gamie goodness, (i won't rush you though)
I wonder about the gender of the attacker, whether it was female or male is the real question, i mean, it could have been the chick she nearly ran over before, (who in turn could've been lesley...) or it could be drew... or one of the guys from Gabby's past who happened to see her with gabby (just a thought)
whatever you do, (once you're in the mood) Don't Stop Writing!