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for Trauma

by CandyCaner

person Smokahontas
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay im so tired right now but I will be mad at myself if I don't review at every chapter. Very good one. If you make them have a car crash i'll keel you >.< But seriously...don't. Love ya, Love.
person RWO
schedule October 6, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oh this is going to be most interesting.
*hugs* Candy dear. :)
person Sky
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good chapter!! Still starting to hate you, in a good way.

Okay. Short, but didn't really feel that way. Good introduction of a new character. Great ending. Gabby is going to be a scary scary driver. XD. Looking forward to the next chapter and I'm slightly expecting a sort of "All hope is lost, But..." kind of storyline as you get into later chapters. Murder is okay too. *malicious thoughts*
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
oooo, gabby's gonna drive!!1 XD
this was such a good chapter!!! *smiles contentedly*

don't stress yourself out and keep up the good work (it's natural) looking forward to more
person RWO
schedule October 5, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:( Poor Gabby. Poor Jamie. I bet right now they feel useless on top of all that helplessness they're feeling.
Hopefully, Gabby steps up and donkey punches the prick in his gonads. :) Then Jamie.
person Smokahontas
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh Ms.Caner you give me the warm fuzzies inside...then ya make me all teary eyed...douche. But really, great chapter. If only every author was blessed with your ability to make the reader actually give a damn about the characters. And I give a big damn about yours. Love ya, Love! Keep it up!
person Shuura
schedule October 4, 2010 at 12:00 AM
o-o so Gabby finally decided to face her parents huh... I wonder what will happen. Though I don't need to wonder. I'll just wait since your updates are always awesome and full of surprises. I love surprises ;P.

As usual, great chapter! Will be looking forward to the next update.
person Sky
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooo. New chapter. *reads through it slowly and carefully*

Seems you've gone and gotten rid of some of Jamie's lesbo habits, such as staring at a hot woman. But leaving all that aside, whoa. Sending Gabby back to her home. I hate Dr. Mosher and his oh so bright idea of having Gabby go back to "face her demons". There is no use for that sort of crap. Makes for good story writing though. I think at some point along all these chapters Candy, I'm going to come to totally hate you because you have to write a certain evil plot and hurt Gabby or Jamie again. DON'T DO IT, PLEASE. JUST LET THE COUPLE LIVE ON IN PEACE!!! *falls to my knees and begs for you to not do anything bad to them*

Looking forward to the next chapter Candy. Keep up the good work.
schedule October 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
that was unexpected.... pleasant but still, unexpected.

i'm waiting for the next development ^w^
person Smokahontas
schedule October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Okay! I finally got to read! I've fallen ill and finally feel good enough to read and review! Great chapter, very sweet and interesting. Curious to see who this Ms.Boucher is. Keep it up Love!!!