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October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter!! Very to the point chapter, keeping in mind that it's like the calm before the storm. So cute that Jamie keeps making trouble when she goes to get a silly bag of M&Ms. Certainly worried now about the two meeting Gabie's parents. It might be very very troublesome. Specially if they notice Jamie in a heartbeat and demand to know who she is in relation to Gabie. Like most parents, who might get stupid and over protective.
Looking forward to the next chapter. And thank you Candy. Life is so cruel some days.
Looking forward to the next chapter. And thank you Candy. Life is so cruel some days.
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October 13, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ooo! You little bitch! Getting us all hot and bothered with that! Loved the chapter. Love ya, Love. Keep it up!
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October 11, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh your such a little devil Ms.Caner. Seems like every chapter you give us little what-ifs that make us go nuts, Anne...Kyle...etc. Keep it up love, You're still the best author this site has seen.
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October 10, 2010 at 12:00 AM
You just seem to be continuing the scene and slowly putting Jamie back in control. Though she's hardly in control of herself, with her injuries. This chapter didn't really move much forward, but it was actually pretty emotional for me. Which is difficult, seeing as of late my whole emotional state has been shot. *cat got hit by a car, died, no need to go into details*
You write very well and this chapter was done with a good bit of humanity. Keep up the good work Candy.
You write very well and this chapter was done with a good bit of humanity. Keep up the good work Candy.
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October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This chapter is perfectly comical. Takes away a huge amount of the seriousness from the previous chapters. Though the mystery driver in the van has about 10% of my suspicion. I just suspect it was a minor, attention diverting moment in the story.
I do adore Ashlee and her bluntness. This is a good point to chill things, make the story nicer and less drama filled.
Still gonna slowly hate you until Kyle and his buddies are dead or in jail for life, Candy. Just the way my likes for this story is going.
*grins and promises not to actually hate you*
I do adore Ashlee and her bluntness. This is a good point to chill things, make the story nicer and less drama filled.
Still gonna slowly hate you until Kyle and his buddies are dead or in jail for life, Candy. Just the way my likes for this story is going.
*grins and promises not to actually hate you*
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October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Awww such a cute chapter. Oh and I finally remembered for this review! This story gets an average of I think 9 reviews per chapter, I figured that 3 chapters ago but it shouldn't of changed much. After looking at a couple other stories with way more views, you have (statistically) the most reviews-per-chapter than like every other story. I don't know what it is about your stories, but damn you get people talkin! -uber hug- Love ya, Love!
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October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So Gabby was a little obvious when she had a crush. And her friend could see that. neither ever said anything, not uncommon. But she's happy that gabby had a crush on her... interesting. i want to see how this plays out for sure. if it does.
what i'm really waiting for right now, is how Gabby's parents are going to react. I keep thinking of her mother blowing her top.
oh, and I pay attention to this story. Trust me, that's a compliment in it's self because I have A.D.D., if i don't like something i can't get through it. :) and your writing i like a lot.
what i'm really waiting for right now, is how Gabby's parents are going to react. I keep thinking of her mother blowing her top.
oh, and I pay attention to this story. Trust me, that's a compliment in it's self because I have A.D.D., if i don't like something i can't get through it. :) and your writing i like a lot.
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October 8, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Sorry for double reviewing, but I noticed what SuicidalWriter17 said. I agree with you, that Anne and Lesley seem to be together as some sort of evil duo. We know at the near end of Therapy that Lesley was sent off somewhere. Maybe she met Anne, seduced her, then came up with a plot to get back a Jamie, or re-seduce Jamie. That or Lesley is just out to kill Jamie now, perhaps... that idea seems Very unlikely though.
Anyways, that seems to be the proper track so far Suicidal. Anne and Lesley are up to something.
Anyways, that seems to be the proper track so far Suicidal. Anne and Lesley are up to something.
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October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I come back and there's all these chapters XD Awesome.
First off, I can't believe Gabriella's going back! Er, gone back now XD The last part of the chapter was funny :P
Let's see...I like Ashlee already! That phone call was awesome. She seems so happy and energetic, and she looks glad to see Gabriella again so that's good. Also, I'm happy that Warren gets to see his sister again, he seems like a good guy. Gabriella left a lot back home when she went to Ohio.
Aaaaanyway, sorry for not reviewing, been busy. Though it's great to see so many updates! I look forward to seeing our favourite couple on another adventure! Meeting the parents muahahaha (lol sorry, lack of sleep makes me crazy XD)
First off, I can't believe Gabriella's going back! Er, gone back now XD The last part of the chapter was funny :P
Let's see...I like Ashlee already! That phone call was awesome. She seems so happy and energetic, and she looks glad to see Gabriella again so that's good. Also, I'm happy that Warren gets to see his sister again, he seems like a good guy. Gabriella left a lot back home when she went to Ohio.
Aaaaanyway, sorry for not reviewing, been busy. Though it's great to see so many updates! I look forward to seeing our favourite couple on another adventure! Meeting the parents muahahaha (lol sorry, lack of sleep makes me crazy XD)
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October 7, 2010 at 12:00 AM
i laughed with Jamie... i really did. oh, god thank you for this chapter. my mom had to come check to make sure that everything was alright with me just now XD. that was just priceless!!! XXDDD
can't wait for more!
can't wait for more!