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Pretty simple chapter. I am worried about those few people. The rapists from Gabby's past, Lesley, Drew or Anne. Haven't a reason to suspect anyone else.

Sure hope that you can get your house redone as fast as possible. Looking forward to the next chapter. Laters.

"Wasn't Lansing fun?"

Okay. who the hell went and did that!? It's been bugging me.
oh well. i took the bait, now i'm in the trap. time to just wait it out. :)

more hugs for you. OOOO

Ah, her mom came around. That's good at least. It was so cute when she said, "And you can cal me 'Mom.'" I loved that :P
And holy crap! The rock! They knew she was there! I'm freaking out!!! What a frickin' plot twist! You're just full of surprises, huh CandyCaner? :P Your stories are the best, just sayin'.

Not gunna lie: the ending text made me think, "It was Kyle, wasn't it?" at first. Congratulations for jumping to conclusions and just assuming things, mind. *claps sarcastically* And jusso yanno, this was a big happy replenisher after that oneshot I just wrote. I almost stopped writing to read it, but I said to myself, "No! Concentrate on writing and stop distracting yourself!" so I didn't read it then. But this was an awesome chapter, and I have to say that when Jamie said that she was (basically) on cloud nine, I actually said aloud, "And now something bad happens," without knowing what was going to happen. (Because it's only natural that something bad was going to happen; that's just how it works.)

The ending to that chapter was happy, then all of a sudden creepy... so suspenseful. Can't wait to see what happens :)!

*stares at the final part of the chapter, then sighs*

You, dear CandyCaner, are very, very good at making all the good, wonderful things happen, and then introducing a mini hell to the final outcome. I wonder who it was that sent the note. Kyle, maybe. Except, the location where Gabie was raped, wasn't Lansing, right? It was some cottage in a forest outside of town, way outside of town. Unless Kyle saw Gabie or one of the gang noticed. Or Lesley and/or Anne. Too many suspects has me wanting to pull hair. Thankfully this is a good hair pulling, unlike being visited by firemen for a bullshit reason. XD.

Keep writing Candy. You stop and I'm gonna lose my mind.

Oh my goodness, this is getting so good!! Don't stop, must. read. more!! *keeps raging need for more chapters contained*

Wow what happened! First Gabriella's dad is happy to see her and then he's saying all that crap to her like she ran away from home for a few days! Wth! And why didn't her mom say anything? Or anyone else for that matter? Though I am glad that Gabriella was able to try and stand up for herself. And that little speech that Jamie gave at the end was great. Honestly, loved every word of it. I just wonder what they're going to do now. I mean, they all know that Gabriella is with Jamie, and they sure as hell aren't happy about it. And to think that her dad mentioned Kyle! "He's a successful entrepreneur who makes lots of money!" Bullshit! If they knew EXACTLY what happened he would have killed that guy a long time ago. Jeez.
Anyway, I loved the chapter. So angsty and full of drama, but it's always tastefully done (not like that soap opera shit). Keep writing those awesome chapters! Love ya girl! :D

Ahhhhh! I missed a chapter....I'm a horrible fan T_T I Loooooooooved the newest chapter so much! My heart almost exploded!! So sorry I missed a review....but i'm the 100th one so...that makes up, right? Love you so much!!! -huggles-

... wow... just wow... the intensity that was portrayed here... wow...