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I'm glad to see you're back and writing darling. I'm missing Gabby in this chapter but that's to be expected and the plot thickens with Lesley... Let's hope Jamie can keep herself in check. ;) Keep it up!

Nice story.

No, that's not all I'm going to say. In fact, I'm going to say somrthing that's going to traumatize you with multiple orgasms. No kidding, I even received an award for being an asshole. (delicious mucha?)

First of all. What the HELL is up with the dramatic moments between Jamie and Gabby? It sends me this gush of emotion that practically lures me in. (NO, I am not insulting you, everything is the opposite, mind you.) Like, you know, I always fall for the 'Jamie-fantasizing-Gabby-being-sexy' trick and makes me cringe whenever I read it. It turns me onnn, baby. Oui oui!

Secondly, the way you write the story. Absolutely gorgeous. Prettier than a beast, hornier than a boner. Man, I wish I could write like you since I get like a bad mark for my essays. I like how the words being the characters to life. Especially Jamie, she's like a fucking gentlema- woman. Ahem. Sometimes I think Jamie might end up crushing Gabby's heart. If she does well Aiaioughta do somethin' shouldn't I?! >:(

Hundredly, nice story. Now continue to type up some words and give me orgasms, you delicious bitch. :D

Poor Jamie. :(

I can understand Gabriella, but, that's a little harsh.

:)

Yep... this chapter totally turned me off from the story. You're a great writer Candy, but I'm just not liking this story anymore. Good luck with the rest of the story.

CandyCaner! You...you evil! She's back!!!
And that Anne chick. Hah. I knew something weird was going to go on with her. Maybe she's going to turn into some creepy stalker and go after Jamie or some weird crap like that.
And did Lesley turn over a new leaf?! :O Since Georges isn't there I'm guessing she's running the therapy sessions. Damn...

ASDFGHJKL, really bad feeling about the stolen key.
I bet Anne has something to do with it.
Yes? No? Maybe?
And Oh my god Lesley!
I died of happiness when I read it was her.
(Am I the only one who doesnt hate her/actually likes her)
Argh Woman, you and your cliffy's.
Now Im gonna be all anxious for your next update.
Please tell me its soon or I might just die!

xoxo

... KEEP AWAY FROM JAMIE, YOU FUCKING BITCH!!! *roundhouse kicks Lesley*

Okay. Good chapter. Bit curious who stole Jamie's key, as it never appeared in the previous chapter. Very much suspecting Anne, but like I said, there was no sign that the key got stolen. But the ending of this chapter was not cool. Why did you have to do it Candy? You could have had Lesley die in some horrible fashion and have all of us love you forever. But you just had to bring her back at the worst place possible.

Oh well. Might get me to keep reading. Good chapter Candy.

Uh oh... :)

Okay... I caught up... wow... just wow... at first i thought it was lesely calling to see her, only to find out it was anne (major heartbreak there...) then to see lesely again, in therapy... maybe it's a good thing she isn't in therapy anymore?

Keep up the good work. don't stress, and i'm waiting for your update

And the plot thickens. I quite glad you're continuing with this story, although I did enough you shorts very much. I really like Jaime and you've use a interesting combination of traits to make her personality. You've done very well with most of the characters, make the real and easy to like or dislike. You stories provide easy reads and at the same time enough dept and character development to keep people hooked. Can't wait for the next chapter.