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by CandyCaner

person RWO
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yea. I have had my hands in my gal's undies on those M&M days. I'm not as persistent as Jamie though. I rarely get far enough to tease her pearl. I'm working on it though. From what I've heard, ladies get quite passionate when it's that time.

It was a sweet chapter. Showing how it really is with couples. Fuck up... stop, think... Double check... Apologize... make up.

course, that process' time span varies depending on what you did. I've learned that quick too.

I'm sure everyone loves you too. I know I do! *hugs* I'm just gonna hold you and read over your shoulder while you type. :)
person Sly
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hey Candy, Glad to see you started this story up again!!! Can't wait to see what happens :)
person Shuura
schedule September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh this chapter is cute and sexy *v* Good job!

Great chapter as usual. Annoyed Gabby is so cute xD. Looking forward to the next update!
person Smokahontas
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ello love. Absolutely loving the new story, when I saw it I went 'EEE'. Missed these characters terribly, i still imagine Gabby with wavy brown hair and Jamie with super light bleach blonde short spikey, not super lesbo, just...cute. Anyways, thats how i'll picture 'em forever, can't be helped. So sad how Jamie can't help but hold onto Lesley. You're one of my favorite writers on here of all time for sure. Thankfully I found 'All Over Again' before your 'Cassandra' so I could bare waiting for this. Love your work and just you in general love. Keep on making my little heart cry with tears of joy and sadness....yes my heart can cry...well ache...you know whag I mean! Love yoooou
person Anon
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ahhh, when I saw you updated i think i died of happiness... about a thousand times.
xD
Ickkk, first chapter looks amazing, and I agree with Circe.
Im trying to figure out how the teaser will come into play.
UGH, im so curious!
Need.to.find.out.
:D
Anyways, YAYY. Now I cant wait for Chap 2.
Hope its soon
xoxo
person rhea's kochanie
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yay!! Their back! their back!!! LOL a sequel finally!! But darn what's up with Jamie?! She can't be still inlove with Lesley when she has Gabby now!!wheeww update soon please..nice start anyway..Love it..
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well....I'm super excited about this sequel and Jamie/Gabby's relationship progress.....and the drama!!!!
person Shuura
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
:O Finally, a new chapter! I got really exited when I saw the update. Anyway, great chapter as usual. I wonder how will Gabriella react if she ever reads the letter? I'm like super curious XD.

I'll look forward to the next chapter!
person ikkichi
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
So, this made waking up at five-thirty a.m. totally worth it. (Still don't know why I woke up quite this early, but I did.) And while daily-updates would be fantastical, I wouldn't want you to stress yourself a bunch over getting them out that fast. (Oh, great. Now my brain died and I can't think of anything else to say. DX) Just had the thought of checking the chapter title, and it's a good thing there's lots of infinitives, right? ... And that just about anything can become a verb, I think.

I loved reading this, though. It felt (to me) that there wasn't even a gap between reading Therapy and now reading Trauma, that Trauma just picked up right where Therapy left off. The ending made me go, "Damn it, Jamie. Now you've jinxed it. Now something's gunna happen. Why'd you go and do that?"
person Celery
schedule September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'll be honest with you, I'm not sure a sequel was a good idea... could just be my inherant distrust for them though. I'll just wait and see I think.