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September 26, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Wow I'm finally reviewing... Eheh.
I love your work CandyCaner! You're an awesome writer, and I'm glad that you decided to do a sequel to Therapy. Though I'm scared that Lesley is going to come back and destroy everything that Jamie and Gabriella have. Don't know why though.
But yeah, the story just started and already it's gone off with a bang! JamiexGabrielle fluff, Jamie getting attacked... It's awesome.
And for some reason I think that Lesley escaped and went all psycho. Terrible prediction but eh, just a feeling. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
I love your work CandyCaner! You're an awesome writer, and I'm glad that you decided to do a sequel to Therapy. Though I'm scared that Lesley is going to come back and destroy everything that Jamie and Gabriella have. Don't know why though.
But yeah, the story just started and already it's gone off with a bang! JamiexGabrielle fluff, Jamie getting attacked... It's awesome.
And for some reason I think that Lesley escaped and went all psycho. Terrible prediction but eh, just a feeling. Keep up the awesome work! ^_^
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
... You made me remember that I know a few people who crave chocolate on their periods. And how I don't, but that I'm now wanting chocolate at random times, despite my dislike of it. I like, though, how M&Ms became a verb. That one amuses me greatly. I just might have to use it sometime.
(Hm. Seems like this is going to be a combined review. Oh, well.)
Jusso yanno, Gamie just makes me go, 'd'aaawww' in my head with all their... fluff and sugar. I just might start getting (more?) cavities from them. *stares at ending* Wha... You're... You're asking *me* to try to and guess what's going to happen? Ut-uh. I don't do predictions. I fail at them. But I will make a venture and say that it's something not-good, I think. I donno, though. My music kind of had a foreboding feel, so I'm going with that. (And these slash ads. Really. "It's pornlicious!" Gawd. If only I had seen the word "kinky" flashing before my eyes, I would have been able to ignore it, like I do most-if-not-all of the ads featured here.)
(Hm. Seems like this is going to be a combined review. Oh, well.)
Jusso yanno, Gamie just makes me go, 'd'aaawww' in my head with all their... fluff and sugar. I just might start getting (more?) cavities from them. *stares at ending* Wha... You're... You're asking *me* to try to and guess what's going to happen? Ut-uh. I don't do predictions. I fail at them. But I will make a venture and say that it's something not-good, I think. I donno, though. My music kind of had a foreboding feel, so I'm going with that. (And these slash ads. Really. "It's pornlicious!" Gawd. If only I had seen the word "kinky" flashing before my eyes, I would have been able to ignore it, like I do most-if-not-all of the ads featured here.)
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
............... i ..............hate.............cliffhangers..............
for some strange reason, Lesley's name pops into my head... followed closely by Gabby's brother.... (crosses fingers for Gabby's brother)
*closes eyes for a moment* i really really really really really want to know what happens next....
waits very impatiently for the next installment...
for some strange reason, Lesley's name pops into my head... followed closely by Gabby's brother.... (crosses fingers for Gabby's brother)
*closes eyes for a moment* i really really really really really want to know what happens next....
waits very impatiently for the next installment...
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
GAH!!!! That is evil!! That is so evil, leaving the end just hanging like that. I honestly want to jump that it's that evil woman, Lesley. But it's very hard to call. It might be some other super beautiful woman that catches Jamie's eye. It might be someone from her old group. I'm also pondering that maybe, it might be neither and for all I know Richard (Dick) shows up. But aside from your great writing and plot, this cliffhanger will make me come back for the next chapter.
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September 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
BAH Damn you and your cliffhangers woman!!! ;) Very nice chapter and like everyone else, I'm never gonna look at/think of M&M's in the same way! I think the term "M&M-ing" is goin to become a most popular term now XD Hmm...possibilities for the mystery person in the alley:
1. Lesley - Don't want it to be, but you've done this to us before xP
2. Warren - Please, please, please let it be a nice cliffhanger
3. Dick - Just because he's a creepy stalker dude
4. Someone from her old therapy group
5. OR...the person Jamie nearly ran over?? Maybe that person was one of the above mentioned, eh???
1. Lesley - Don't want it to be, but you've done this to us before xP
2. Warren - Please, please, please let it be a nice cliffhanger
3. Dick - Just because he's a creepy stalker dude
4. Someone from her old therapy group
5. OR...the person Jamie nearly ran over?? Maybe that person was one of the above mentioned, eh???
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I was highly amuse with chapter two. It was interesting.
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September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Nice little sex scene. Bit curious why you left the tattoo on Gabby. But it certainly makes me think and worry. M&M?! That is quite... well, I'm going to think about periods in a different way now. It's quite comical really.
Always a pleasure to review good work Candy. This chapter was a little short though. Felt that way anyways. Hoping for a bit more length next chapter if you can manage.
Always a pleasure to review good work Candy. This chapter was a little short though. Felt that way anyways. Hoping for a bit more length next chapter if you can manage.
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September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loved the new chapter. I bet you threw in that 'ran my fingers through my dark hair' part just to spite me! I can't help it! I got their images in my brain and nothing can change that. But anyways...Love the litte quirks you give you characters to make them more...fleshed out, M&Ms being what i'm referring too. Can't wait to see hows things progress. Gabby better not open that freakin' drawr! -Love ya, Love.
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September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOOHOO! I am so happy to see that Therapy has a sequel. I was hoping to see this continue and it has! =D Good work CandyCaner. I can't wait to read more of this. =D
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September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
WOOT!!! I'm never gonna think of M&M's in the same way ever again. I'm loving how much Gabby has grown when it comes to dealing with affection and whatnot. Anyways...I'm still excited and very much interested in how this sequel will unfold. :D