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for Trauma

by CandyCaner

person Alexis
schedule February 8, 2014 at 12:00 AM
I'm loving Trauma so much. Please update~!
person Shaunee
schedule May 15, 2012 at 12:00 AM
Hey :))

So i read your story the last two days! And omg i love it!!! I think its One of the best Stories here!!!!!!! Its so great... I just want To read the next Chapter, so pls!!!!!!!!!
Okay im not a native english speaker but i dont know a Word to describe your Story Even Not in my language!!!! :D
Just Great <3
Pls come up soon with a New chapter!!!!!
Luvvv,
Shaunee
person Meaudre' Nelson
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm so happy that you updated!
person ikkichi
schedule July 9, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So... I never managed to find something to say in a review for the last chapter. Sorry about that. I know how much you like reviews and all. The last chapter was great, by the way, and I take it you've finally found the drive for Trauma again, even if it's just for a little while?

And, Candy, I'll have you know that (because of you mentioning it and because my brain likes to just run and get carried away with ideas and images most of the time) throughout most of the chapter I was thinking stuff like, "Oh, Jamie, isn't it a shame that Gabby actually likes Lesley?" And then at the end (before/during Jamie and Gabby's romp) my brain decided to start whispering something like, "And here's Jamie, she's gunna end up with that one/other chick." Great job, Candy. You're corrupting my brain with different ideas and it seems to have taken a liking to them.

But yeah. Great chapter and, even if you lose your drive to write more of this story right after this, I'll still be looking forward to reading the next chapter -- whenever it comes out.
schedule July 7, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god Candy, I can't physically handle how beautiful this chapter is. I was sitting here all "Nonono Jamie, don't mess this up, say you love her!"
And then she said she loves her and I had to hug my pillow. Beautiful, just beautiful.
person RWO
schedule February 14, 2011 at 12:00 AM
:)
Hugs for Candy!
person ikkichi
schedule February 10, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Hm. Yanno, I'm not quite sure if I really liked this chapter or not. I mean, I did like it 'cause it was something to read and I like your stuff, but I donno if I *really* liked it, yanno? (Prolly not; kinda feels like I'm goin' in circles and not making things clear.) Maybe it was that I went into this with some skepticism, wonderin' if you were actually writing this 'cause you were inspired and wanted to, or if it was just for the readers. And I think my thinkin' that it was actually just for the readers kinda constrained the joy I could get outta this. I donno. But I did like it, as I mentioned above.
person ikkichi
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
So... yeah. I started reading 21, realized I can't remember shit about what's going on, so I had to go back and read 20. That, like, never happens. Usually. Have to say, though: taking a four-hour nap was apparently a better idea than I originally thought if I woke up to this waiting. I still can't believe it, honestly. What made you decide to try writing more of this? Was it the number of people wanting more, or were you suddenly reinspired? I'm curious. xD

... Uuuut ooohhh... I have a bad feeling about this lunch outing with Lesley. I keep thinking that Gabby's gunna be there as well, and it's gunna be like, "Oh fuck. Gabby? This isn't what it looks like!" or something.
person RWO
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
welcome back! how you been?

I missed reading this. the suspense and anticipation have ended!

okay, it's back. looking forward to the next chapter. I wonder if gabby sees them at lunch or something.

Take care. :D
schedule January 21, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I'm soooooo glad you're back! =) =) =)