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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Love this story! I like your other David story too. hahah
I love the way David thinks, he's so not "freaked out" about anything! lol
I know that English isn't your first language; I could tell by the tenses. Most of the time when they should be past tense, such as smiled, you wrote down present, such as smile.
But the story is great! Can't wait for the next chapter!
I love the way David thinks, he's so not "freaked out" about anything! lol
I know that English isn't your first language; I could tell by the tenses. Most of the time when they should be past tense, such as smiled, you wrote down present, such as smile.
But the story is great! Can't wait for the next chapter!