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for Mind Your Own Business

by Katiesroom

schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Yaay for publically inappropriate kisses, my favorite kind of inappropriate kisses! And yaay for brain vomit :D !! Even tho I'm sad to see it end, bring on the final chapter!
schedule November 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahahah, ok I love Cas again! :) I'm so fickle.

Ok, so Cas never gave their secrets away. Good for him. Because he fell in love with Sydney. I wonder if he knows that Sydney feels the same....

Anyway, great chapter; I can't believe Verona knew this whole time about her son and Cas, AND the company! lol

Great job!!!!

And see, I didn't have to wait long at all for this update! hahhaha
schedule November 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I don't know what rock I've been fucking hiding under, but it wasn't until last night that I said, Shit! I think Mind Your Own Business was updated like a week (maybe more) ago!!!

But I remembered this morning and got right to it. Only to find out that scumsucking sonofabitch Cas betrayed our dear, poor, Sydney. I cannot believe Cas was like a secret spy or something. What a shit. How the hell can he ever redeem himself.

And Jesus fucking Christ, Sydney fell in love with that douche. He better have a good explanation. I can't wait to hear it.

Ok, well, it really sounds like I hate Cas, but I don't. I don't understand. Maybe he was sent there to spy on them at the beginning, but I think the relationship between him and Sydney evolved into way more than finding out "enemy" secrets.

Anyway, I can't wait for the next update and on the bright side for me, I don't have to wait as long as the other readers! hahah Ok, lame joke....
person kr4nky
schedule November 3, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Lovely writing. lovely characters, lovely interaction, lovely smex. Write more? Pretty pleaseee? XD
schedule October 29, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh God how I love this story! Sydney finally realized he's in love w/Cas, and I bet Cas feels the same way.

They have such awesome chemistry together.

The whole age thing was funny. So, Sydney's twenty-five, how old is Cas? Not much younger, right?
schedule October 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Just read all 6 chapters in a sitting. Absolutely delish, I love the fact that it's complete reverse with Cas topping instead of Chase. The characters were believable and Chase is very well developed. The only thing that seemed strange is that Chase says all his friends call him Chase, but his POV is written as Sydney.

I'll have to keep an eye out for new chapters! I can't wait to see where it goes :D
person Anon
schedule October 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I love this story Sydney is adorable they are so cute together. Please update soon.
schedule October 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Oh no! What's gonna happen? Someone's going to find out about them, right? Omg, did someone see them kissing in the parking lot?

I love the way Sydney is constantly freaking out. He's so cute. And they both know something's going on between them, but they won't admit it.

Anyway, awesome chapter; looking forward to the next one!
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Hahaha, emotional cluster-fuckage! Omg, I love that phrase! Omg, can I use that somewhere?

I was literally laughing so hard the tears were pouring down my face. Oh shit. The image of Sydney trying his best to carry on this stupid phone conversation, while Cas is purposely pounding into him, was fucking hysterical! And then he completely forgets the phone call! Omg, that was so fucking funny! And they've gone thru three boxes of tissues already! Shit! They should really think about towels; save the trees. lol

And.....I think Sydney is getting kinda emotional regarding Cas. Ooohhh, what's gonna happen if he falls for him? Or is it too late? lol

Great chapter; you are amazingly funny! :) What an awesome sense of humor you have!
schedule October 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'll learn not to call at certain hours of the day, if it helps keep sexy boys have a sexy time. HAHA

Little Sydney, you're in love!? OH the time has come when drama oozes from the chapters, YES!
Thank you for the update, and the PWP~ It was delicious <3

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