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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn JJ has Lily on her mind 24/7!! Morgan is a bish~ haha. I love the chapter and I hope JJ is going to play nurse on Lily!! The chapter was short but its better than waiting for the next installment haha. Keep it up!!
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Good good GOOD! In the words of some country singer, 'I like it, I love it, I want some more of it.' Really I can't wait for more. ^^
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September 24, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Well to contine the song 'I like it, I love it, I can't get enough of it!'
Seriously though, this is great stuff, I can't wait for the terrible excellent things J.J. will do to Morgan.
You're great, keep it up!
Seriously though, this is great stuff, I can't wait for the terrible excellent things J.J. will do to Morgan.
You're great, keep it up!
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September 23, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Muuuuuuuuch better, spelling and capitalizing I mean, the story has always been good. Well love the chapter, seems to be progressing nicely. That arm gash thing...bleh that just sounded painful...Keep it up, Love!
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Loving the story but one little gripe. Proof. Reed. Please start capitalizing every sentance. It's a technical error but annoys me. Your writing is great except for some puncuation, spelling and capitalization errors. Anyway, love the story.
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
JJ you need to be Lilly's knight in shining armor.. haha! Well at least JJ had somewhat a glimpse of Morgan. (cut her JJ!!) Anywho, im loving the progression you have here. I am looking forward for tomorrows chapter!!
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September 22, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm still really diggin' it, keep it up. ^^
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Damn frickin ya, a cliffhanger! damn i wonder if there will be a scrap with Morgan and JJ. Very exciting indeed. Lilly, let JJ sweep you off your feet aweay from Morgan already haha. Well keep the chapters rolling!
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September 21, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AHHH CLIFFHANGER! I love that you're updating this so regularly; it makes me happy! :) J.J. must really like Lily to go to her house and help her out. I'm glad to see it. ^^ Her ideal mate, I'm assuming, has blonde and soft blue eyes, right? Haha, I can't wait for the next installment!
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September 20, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I hate it!..... but i love it haha. Sweet chapter, i like how Lilly is being financially independent! I hope Lilly will dump Morgan's ass soon. It's kinda of like a boomerang effect with Morgan.Well at least JJ and Lilly met!! I wonder what's going to happen next... Well keep it up pretty lady~