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October 16, 2010 at 12:00 AM
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October 14, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like the way that you shift the point of view between the characters. It keeps things interesting, and helps the reader to get to know the various characters.
I like the heat between Tegan and Soren, but I'd really like to see more between Tegan and Storm -- his devotion to her is so sweet. And sexy . . . I hope that they get together . . .
I like the heat between Tegan and Soren, but I'd really like to see more between Tegan and Storm -- his devotion to her is so sweet. And sexy . . . I hope that they get together . . .
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October 12, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I like how the plot is unfolding -- I am really getting caught up in your story.
Cruel cliffhanger! Please update soon.
Cruel cliffhanger! Please update soon.
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October 1, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This is a really interesting concept, with great characters. I hope that you update soon!
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September 19, 2010 at 12:00 AM
AAAHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!! You don't end a chapter like that!!! >.< u better update soon!!!!
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
muy interesante, pero tenemos que tener nuevos capitulos para juzgar el escrito, espero con ansiedad, ana maria
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
good start. I'm liking the story line :)
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September 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
Interesting please do continue I'd love to know how this plays out.