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for Waxing Gibbous

by Sarah_Wolfe

person Sara
schedule February 28, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I am very excited to read what happens next.... This is such a good read!!!
person Bee
schedule February 12, 2011 at 12:00 AM
You seriously need to publish this story. It's so good. I love it. I love every single chapter. I really enjoyed that Kerr and Soren have some what buried the hatchet, well at least they had a heart to heart. And wow that scene between Tegan and Soren was HOT! Like really hot. I mean Soren is one hot wolf. He certainly makes no bones about wanting Tegan. He is pretty funny.
“What I fell like –” Soren paused, trying to restrain himself “– is ripping every stitch of fabric from our bodies and burying myself deep inside you. I’ve wanted you before, Tegan, but never this strongly. I have to fight myself not act on the impulse. It could be because of the moon. But I don’t think so. I think it’s the curse. I think the beast building inside of me wants you as well. I don’t know if I’d be able to stay in control and I don’t want it hurting you. We must stop.”
That was a really interesting paragraph. I mean does the monster inside of Soren want her as well and will he be able to control the monster from getting her? Or is a combination of his wolf, himself, and the curse inside him that wants her and is the reason why the curse doesn't completely take over when he is with her? I am so curious to find out how this all turns out. And how is Storm. Is he ok with Tegan and Soren hooking up or is he still harboring some unresolved feelings for Tegan?
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Ok happy they kissed, but I am actually more happy with Kerr and Sorens talk. Yeah brotherly love right back where it's supposed to be, not best friends, still totally willing to kill each other but always willing to fight FOR eachother.
person ginstar3
schedule February 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
yay happy dance for the new chapter. I lol'd at Soren's "big sex god" joke too funny. Awesome chapter. Please don't leave us in suspense for long. Can't wait for the next chapter.
person ginstar3
schedule January 19, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow the tension rises...can't wait to find out what happens next. I hope Tegan ends up with Storm, he needs her more than Soren and for some reason I'm craving lemonade. I wonder what that's all about? *wink*

LEMON*LEMON*LEMON*LEMON*LEMON*LEMON*LEMON*LEMON*LEMON*LEMON*

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Yay I love this story and you are one hell of an awesome writer...sending a muse your way from upstate NY....Gin
person Bee
schedule January 15, 2011 at 12:00 AM
I totally love this story! I am so happy that Tegan stood up and brought Kerr to her house. He seems like a nice guy/wolf who was at the wrong place at the wrong time. I really hope Tegan can find a cure for him. I love that Soren finally confessed his true feelings for Tegan, now he can openly pursue her! Can't wait to see that! lol. And I wonder how Story feels about all of this? Has he accepted Tegan as his best friend or does he have unresolved feelings for her as well? That was really nice of Ulrick to fix her house so wonderfully. I think he really does care for Tegan but it's hard because his first priority is to protect the pack. I can't wait to read about the dynamics of having Kerr, Storm, and Soren all under the same roof! lol. Love this story!!!!!!!!!! More please!
person Bee
schedule January 11, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Oh my god! Tegan has to find a cure to save Soren and Kerr. She can do it! She is the almight coolest witch ever! lol. I think Storm might have been upset because I think he is jealous of Soren and Tegan's interactions. I think she is going to be become like best friends with Kerr (well more like a big brother)! But I wonder who has her affections, Soren or Storm? My guess is there is something romantic underneath all her bantering with Soren so Storm is doomed as the best friend? I dying to find out. lol. I love this story! Thank you for another wonderful chapter!
schedule January 2, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Happy with the new chappy and can't wait for the next.
person Bee
schedule December 25, 2010 at 12:00 AM
That was awesome! I love that Tegan got to meet her father. It was so cute when she called him dad. Maybe Soren and Tegan will have a little girl and call her Lily? I hope his brother isn't the one they were referring to as the serpent. I love this story!!!!!!
person dv2white
schedule December 18, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I halfheartedly opened your story to read, thinking that I'll read half of the first chapter then exit, never to retun because the story didn't capture my attention. However just the opposte occured; now I am among the many fans of the story in hoping that you will update soon.