rate_review Reviews

I just read this story for the first time and I absolutely love it. Please update soon!!!

Ekkk! What happened?!!? I am so in love with the story, characters and their development. Please come back. We love you!!!

Just wanted to say awesome original fiction you've got going here. I just stumbled across this and ha the pleasure of reading what you have done so far all it one day! Keep up the good work and can't wait to see where you take it, love the character development you have going on. :)

I love when my feelings are correct....wait which feelings? lol. My guess about Storm and Kerr? I have to go and re-read my previous review. haha.

Loved this chapter! Ok Soren and Tegan are soooo cute. I mean when get's possessive of her, it's hot. And when she got possessive over him with Cara, that was hot too.

I'm looking forward to another steamy scene between Tegan and Soren, come one, just a tiny little bit in the next chapter...please?!? Pretty please? I bet Soren is going to be so pissed when Tegan tells him she thinks he has feelings for her because he tasted her blood. I just love their interactions with each other.

I'm glad Tegan is weary about the other clan.

I'm totally loving this story. I can't wait until the next chapter!

I am very glad the pack aren't trusting blindly. Hopefully, they'll be a bit less unprepared for when the cacky starts flying. Storm and Kerr huh. Wouldn't have picked that but it's an interesting potential match.

Gaah! Progress is progress!! Soren progress makes me happy; I hope it goes places. Good places >.>... Thank you for updating :)

I love Soren's possessiveness. I wonder if this new Alpha will start having designs on Tegan after he finds out how powerful she is?!? And I kind of got the feeling that Storm seemed to like Soren's brother more then just a friend, eh? lol

I love this! At times, I felt like certain points could have been clarified more, carried over to the next chapter or something so that the ends weren't rushed at the last minute, but overall I like the style!
At the risk of getting pummeled with tomatoes, I'm going to say I much prefer Soren to Storm. Sure, Soren is a jerk and he's still shrouded in - a lot - of shadow as far as motive and emotion goes, but there's something about Storm that just doesn't sit well. He's -too- nice, almost suffocatingly so, and it makes me feel like he's laying it on thick for a reason. :\
-- Off to continue reading!

Oh thank oz you finally updated! Oh no, how could they let that pack join? After everything going on right now it is suspicious. I am happy Tegan and Soren's relationship is progressing, I can't wait for the next chapter.

woah, talk about welcoming in trouble.